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Ever-Breathless Sunset

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The veil of sunset bares her afterglow In marmalade prism along the coast, Revealing her ever- breathless warmth And my naked glance lingers, as she, In thinning haze, dips…a final adieu While I gently moan to catch her last splendour. Contest: Skat's 8/7/2015 by nette onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2015 8:35:00 PM

wowowow, this is fantastic imagery, nette. a very well deserved win!!

Bill Lindsay

Date: 8/18/2015 5:27:00 AM

I had this as the winner ... congrats ;)

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/18/2015 12:00:00 AM

Nette, this is so beautiful. Congratulations on your awesome :-)Alexis

Skat A

Date: 8/17/2015 11:10:00 PM

Nette. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/11/2015 7:18:00 AM

What sweet words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/10/2015 2:12:00 PM

Beautiful description of sunset. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2015 1:23:00 PM

Ahh!! 'Tis dark and we have to depart from this lovely peace..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your presence is always uplifting..Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 8/8/2015 5:51:00 PM

Your trademark mellow words drip from each line, Nette! This is beautiful and sensuous, and even I am left breathless! ~ Hugs // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/8/2015 5:55:00 AM

Sigh... Reading your writes always make me heave a sigh, Nette. Such delicate beauty in all the lines...I'll just enjoy reading them then...hugs!

James Horn

Date: 8/7/2015 8:57:00 PM

Nette, This poem paves the way for another poem. Right. Just went over 1,400 poems. Can't believe it. Jim Horn

Amelie Mara

Date: 8/7/2015 1:02:00 PM

The eloquence of your stirring poem builds up into some feel of grandeur and solemnity. And the final impeccable line speaks so much to me!The beauty of a sunset makes one misty-eyed all the time!

Bill Lindsay

Date: 8/7/2015 9:50:00 AM

the 'naked glance' brings to mind the almost voyeuristic mindset of the observer. Beautifully constructed - a tour-de-force. ;)

Ian Jones

Date: 8/7/2015 5:52:00 AM

Lovely poem, lovely image. No two sunsets are ever the same and so can be absorbingly enjoyed again and again and again. Kind regards, Ian

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/7/2015 5:28:00 AM

OH DEAR!!! :) This is sensuous...at least to me! Lovely write, Nette. Sweet Sweet Sweet. Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/7/2015 2:35:00 AM

Fantastic sunset that envelopes the heart in beauty! Excellent dear, nette. Good luck!