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Below is the poem entitled EVENING SONG which was written by poet Monterey Sirak. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Chickens fluff feathers    tuck heads under wings

cluck a soft lullaby to newly hatched babies

Restless cattle hooves still

as with grace hidden by lumbering girth

settle onto grassy pastures    close bashful eyes

Dew amasses slowly    contemplates falling

while drowsy sun gradually settles

under covers of night

Slowly awakening moon peels off

her diaphanous robe    layer by layer

letting her full radiance glow

Copyright © Monterey Sirak

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  1. Date: 6/17/2015 3:47:00 PM
    Interesting. You think of animals in your moonlit idyll. Me too. They represent a quality so rare in humans - innocence. Good stuff. Love, daver

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 4:04:00 PM
    Just dreamy! I can see you like I have some farm in you! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 4:35:00 PM
    A beautiful poem

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 1:23:00 AM
    what a lovely evening song this is. Glad I saw this tonight!

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 11:04:00 AM
    Lovely hon, just lovely-you put my soul at rest.....Loven it. As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 8:42:00 AM
    Good morning Monterey.

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 8:59:00 AM
    Stunning, who would have thought a poem about a chicken and cows could be so beautiful.

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 2:51:00 PM
    Yes, that's how I see and experience nature! A real rapture of the mind and soul! Thanks for sharing! Blessings, Hanitra

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 11:57:00 AM
    You pull all the stops my friend when it comes to uncovering nature and showing it's full effects, you surprise me a little more every day, I'm in awe, love n' hugs xxx

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 10:16:00 AM
    Goosebumps!!!! This was borderline magical. A terrific job!