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Even Angels Cry

even angels cry giant crimson tears holding all the dreams and fears of an angel of untold years his entire soul captured in a few fallen tears even angels cry his tears fall to the ground in a god forsaken land that was never found except by demons who gather round as the angel's tears soften the forgotten ground even angels cry his rain of tears will never end and on the final days god will send his angel's flaming tears that will come to mend men's tortured souls that cry out for the end even angels cry

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Date: 4/15/2010 9:48:00 AM
This is beautiful (: i love it
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Date: 5/17/2009 8:38:00 PM
giant crimson tears... brings such a powerful image to my mind. -Alley
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Date: 2/24/2009 4:19:00 PM
Hi Adam, this is a beautiful, throught-provoking work. I thought "flaming tears that will come to mend men's tortured souls" painted a very strong image. Too bad that angels have to cry! Best - Carolyn
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Date: 12/10/2008 8:58:00 AM
Read my new poem Let's Get Lost with an open mind. . . . Love (I Think) Your Friend Alexz ^u^
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Date: 12/9/2008 8:06:00 PM
Marvelous composition, rhyming and flow... your second and third verses suggests a post-apocalyptic vision... BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/8/2008 12:03:00 PM
wow this was a beautiful poem, i loved the message. Awesome job. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/8/2008 11:24:00 AM
Have you made up ur mind yet? Love (I Think) Your Friend Alexz
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Date: 12/8/2008 10:50:00 AM
An extremely heartfelt poem. I loved the use of angels crying to forward your poignant message. Peace always, John
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Date: 12/7/2008 8:13:00 PM
AWESOME Poem!!! Love (I Think) Your Friend Alexz ^u^
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