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written 14th Nov 2001

I recall prayers from this bed, those left unsaid, those truly mean't with every breath 
 as I continue to lay here, still in this bed
Not one of them ever answered..
 is there anyone else I could maybe, talk to instead...
My hopes, along with all my dreams
 forced to demoralise, these will never be
So why Do I continue, to stay?
 once again with my faith the option is simple, only pray
Not one friend listened to my cries, Lord come for me, take me away 
 I am only human, And yes, I have made my mistakes
Nothing in this world could have passed, to prove I told the truth
 I obeyed every task you set, all of them proven impossible for any person
I'm weak no more, " I ask ye' oh Lord", have I not endured equal to that of my 'shame' 
 forever to wander earth, lost and betrayed, will I ever again see mankind the same
Oh Lord desperate for guidance, and reassurance I'm at an all time critical low..
 will I ever again trust in humans working with me, in creating a new home, no!
I did everything humanly possible to achieve your tasks,  You are clearly delusional
 now the answer's little late, I too can see, and the only reasonable conclusion is
                                            "I AM, ETERNALLY DAMNED"

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  1. Date: 7/5/2013 3:06:00 AM
    Denise, This is really sad this poem and it is well written, and to me it sounds you have not found happiness in your life, well I am here to cheer you up with my reviews and comments, you did make one spelling mistake, so that is pretty good, not perfect mind you, but pretty good. I will make you a better poet. you wrote this in 2001, that means the poems now should be great ?, well I will check and see, all the best Denise, John