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Prism of sky huddles in its wake Now slipping in peace of days, bygone A rosy star flames, quivers and is done To twinkle its candle on our halls . I feel your breath entering my eyes as thoughts inhale tinted memories; Grayish, then blue, drifting with pale leaves. Somehow, tiny beads of pearly dew Fall gently marking ended hours; My sighs meander, deep in prayers Where daylight peals along gardens wide, And fibers of orchids knot an embrace Till afterlife’s veil brushes my face. Your whispers calm without hint of speech Expressing love as chapel bells toll Our breaths meet, same time, when songs console Then resounds, stills, and resounds again. It is night; the vaults of stars linger Reminding me, I’ll follow you… there. Eternal Breath Contest of Gail Doyle by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 11/30/2013 8:21:00 AM
    Your poems always carry a sense of dreamy ethereal beauty that floats the reader along. I always sigh for I reach the end too soon. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 5:13:00 AM
    lovely dreamy write Nette congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 2:53:00 PM
    Dreamy nette, could you give me one for Mother's Night? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 6:49:00 AM
    another great write congratulations. Robert

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 3:54:00 AM
    many congrats nette love xx

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 9:06:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, nette

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:42:00 PM
    congrats on your win Nette...beautiful write

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 7:36:00 PM
    Nette...I really think you have conversations with angels....or could....your words fit together so beautifully I'm afraid to breathe...:-)

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    Date: 11/26/2013 7:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And congratulations.... :-)
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 5:25:00 PM
    Great win nette.Congratulations. (: ) PU.

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 5:15:00 PM
    Nice win Nette....PD

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 2:32:00 PM
    - Eternal Breath Contest: Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - A contest that was at least for me a deep theme. - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, VERY SKILLED WRITTEN!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 1:15:00 AM
    great poem nette.(: ) Jenish.

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 3:20:00 PM
    A beautiful, beautiful poem! Very touching and endearing. Excellent writing, Nette! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the encouraging comments. I truly appreciate it! :)

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:25:00 AM
    Hi, my dear friend! I was on my way back to your page when I've clicked my inbox. This is a splendid write. Hand salute again! Yes, Thanks God, I'm finally in Bkk now. Thank you so much for the condolences my dearest friend. I will do my best to go home on Dec. so I can meet my uncle. I'll keep in touch always ok. Thanks a lot for everything. About my contest, napuno na ba?? 'Cuz not ready to judge yet lol. Biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 2:14:00 AM
    Etheric verse for enchanted hearts and enraptured souls under the watchful eye of the vault of heavens!

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 11:20:00 PM
    this is gorgeous, and the ending is so romantic. I am curious why you bolded certain letters. Is it symbolic? soupmail for ya

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 4:44:00 PM
    Heart touching poem, my beautiful friend. Romantic fragrance is there too. Lovely done. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 9:54:00 AM
    soupmail :)

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 8:10:00 AM
    If such is the surrounding, I will be inspired to write poem after poem, nette

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 9:10:00 PM
    This is a perfect majestic write that you have written here today my friend! I am enamored by the splendorous words your have displayed here, "vaults of stars linger", "tiny beads of pearly dew" all of which are tremendous and awe inspiring! I really enjoyed reading this dynamic poem this evening! What a magnificent piece, Great Work!!