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The room is scented, heavy sweet Where we converge to please and treat A lesson book we each have shared On where to touch when we lie bare Erogenous has different tastes And moods of brazen and of chaste On each of us, she’s marked her zone To get rewards, our skills we hone You want to make me pleasure wet I’ll tell you how; it’s a sure bet It starts when strong hands strip me bare Placed on my side, I’ll take you there Let hungry lips find curve of waist Now let your tongue just tickle taste Then trail it from my hips to breast You’ve passed Part I of Hot Zone Test! Then lie me flat to see the heat My eyes are closed for finger treat Soft light caress, a gentle squeeze of rounded breasts, then pinch to tease Take cherry tips and gently suck Spend some time here; you’ll be in luck I’ll do the same and make you sigh With candy cane, sweet lullaby And if you want to hear your name In breathless moans of sexied fame Then give my neck a gentle bite A hicky fuse to dynamite You thought you’d wait, but flames are hot They blaze up from each pleasure spot And so you thrust with fiercest groan “Oh yes, OH…Y E S!” I writhe and moan Hands in my hair, you hit the max And we erupt and then…relax We savor satisfaction bliss Erogenous blows us a kiss For Rachel Firmin's Hotsy Totsy Contest February 28, 2015 N/A Re-entered in Rob Carmack's Screwed II Contest April, 9, 2015 No editing done

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Date: 9/28/2015 2:34:00 PM
Oh how I wish every woman was as open with their desires as the one in your poem. I've read both of the poems you suggested and another. Very passionate, a bit naughty and incredibly sensual.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/28/2015 9:24:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read, James. It gives the ABC poem a framework of reference. Naughty.....but nice.
Date: 4/18/2015 6:04:00 PM
WOW, Jade glad you got a second chance with this hotty poem... Love Linda
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/19/2015 2:21:00 AM
Hi, PD. Just wanted to make sure I thanked you for reading some of my poems yesterday. I've deleted some, but....I wanted to make sure I thanked you for your kindness to me. I really appreciate it. Hugs
Date: 4/15/2015 8:44:00 PM
Excellent write, this is a Hotsy Totsy write, write temp going up. 7 and congratulations on your write. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 4/15/2015 4:52:00 AM
glad to see this get showcased Eileen a sultry sexy write that is hot hot hot:-) congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/15/2015 5:50:00 AM
Thanks for the visit, Jan. Glad you liked it. Hugs
Date: 4/15/2015 2:12:00 AM
I guess too hot for Rachel, but just right for me. Congrats Eileen.
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Date: 4/15/2015 5:50:00 AM
I'm glad it found favor with you. Thank you.
Date: 3/1/2015 2:53:00 AM
My dearest bewitching enchantress, Aphrodite could not be more passionate, you have shown the true pleasure between too lovers in such a powerfully sexual way. I am again in awe of your ability to put your reader into your story. It is a masterful work that could only come from from the heart of a true lover. Love Shane xxx
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Date: 3/3/2015 9:22:00 AM
In many ways the health of a relationship is measure by what takes place in these times of intimacy...How much will one give...How much will one please...depends on how much one loves. I'm glad you liked this write, Shane. Hugs
Date: 2/28/2015 5:22:00 PM
Boy Howdy is what we say in Texas when things are hot -- and the boy here is definitely howdy!! The Passion Queen has made her claim . . . your words zero in on the incredible moment when two lovers move into the erogenous zone -- giving and taking, the physical pleasure superheated by the emotional connection of two souls. Love making is a creative act and your words wake up our imaginations to boundless possibilities of how to love and satisfy our lovers. Delicious, 7 and a Fav.
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Date: 3/1/2015 12:11:00 AM
Well, Howdy, Mister! How you been doin? Like this sizzler, do ya? Well it sure is HOT! Spicy and temperature wise. ;) There are the OBVIOUS erogenous zones and then there are those at are specific to a particular man or woman...like the curve of the waist. Butterfly kisses...little trailing tongue....ooooooohhhhhhh...lovely! So sort of played around with what I like...Hope Rachel likes those zones too! ;) Maybe then she'll rate this well. Read Abdul Malik's entry for this. It's called Basic Instinct. WOWZERS. Thanks for the visit, David. Always...a pleasure.
Date: 2/28/2015 12:24:00 PM
OMG.. sultry as love's heat, Eileen... incredible passion fruit!.. huggs
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Date: 2/28/2015 1:08:00 PM
:) Nice and juicy! ;) Well, Nette...you did goad me with mention of passion fruit! ;) Hugs
Date: 2/28/2015 11:14:00 AM
Wow, Eileen, I feel like I just got a proper lesson in writing for the contest! From Poesia Erotica 101 to a Master's! I feel like withdrawing my unplanned entry! Levity aside, this is an amazing write. While being sensual, still maintained some humor, and yes, it's kosher! Hugs! Kim :D
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/28/2015 1:10:00 PM
Should check it out. Good luck, dear. Hugs
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Date: 2/28/2015 11:18:00 AM
HA HA HA HA! Oh, Kim....I edited some bits. There are some very EROTIC entries for this. Read Basic Instinct by Abul Malik. It's SO good. WOW! Then there's Richard's GOOD GIRL EROTICA...Ahem...and those are the ones I know of. Mine is a bit brazen, but....the contest calls for it. That's my excuse! :) You join, woman....That's an order. HUGS :)
Date: 2/28/2015 9:38:00 AM
A flow of an erotic river that's filled with great passionate visuals and lovely rhyme. I wonder how long that fuse lasted before the big bang! An excellent entry with maximum rating that must make the high grade. hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/28/2015 1:12:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. Hope you're right about that high grade! :) Anyway...it was fun to write. Thanks for the lovely visit....Yes, I'm on a short fuse! ;) Oh dear...
Date: 2/28/2015 8:33:00 AM
Your title got me this time! Just proves what I've always said, titles are the key! And also thanks to Demetrios for his definition! Is it just me or is it getting hot in here! Love Kenny xxxxx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/28/2015 1:13:00 PM
It's getting HOT HOT HOT in here. :) Glad my title reeled you in, Kenny.. Hugs
Date: 2/28/2015 8:05:00 AM
Yes it is tasteful!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/28/2015 1:15:00 PM
Thanks for the vote of confidence, Richard.
Date: 2/28/2015 7:24:00 AM
Erogenous: A compound, Greek in origin, word that is made up from: "Eros" (Cupid) and "Genus" class or type! Therefore a poem dedicated to the erotic type! Have mercy dearest temptress upon our poor hearts (I am talking on behalf of men), why don't you think of the agony you put us through? Probably some of us may not be strong enough to read the whole poem. If this happens you will be responsible! Hellishly hot! A seven and a... cold shower!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/1/2015 12:13:00 AM
Esa akoma edho, giati esai denatos!!! Alla...prosexse! Kai ego, emai denati!!! ;) Mypos pio denati apo sena! ;)
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:45:00 AM
I am still here and still... smiling!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/28/2015 7:42:00 AM
You are strong enough! :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/28/2015 7:38:00 AM
There you are, my wise poet, coming to give us the Greek origin of the word. I often do that I class. I cannot express to you my deep love for the Greek language. I often tell my family...I if I could choose where to be born and what nationality to choose, I'd be Greek. You are blessed. :) Eroteftika...I have fallen in love. How beautiful such a language is. I am a temptress, for I must be for this contest, my dear poet. I write to win....if possible. Hellishly hot is beautiful, is it not? Thank you for going through agony for this....I'm pleased. Hugs
Date: 2/28/2015 7:09:00 AM
This is indeed hotsy totsy and ooh la lotsy. Sexy and a a whole lotta fun Eileen!
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:41:00 AM
Richard, what could be more fun than an afternoon spent in the ways this poem describes. Nothing. I tell you, nothing. Ah...well, I know you are a VERY strong contender in this contest. Your story is just so.....I seriously can't describe it, so I'll just say....It's a strong contender. :) Thanks for the ohhhh la lotsy. You're my litmus test of when I've overdone something or not, Richard. I take it...this is still kosher. Hugs
Date: 2/28/2015 7:04:00 AM
Soooo hotsy totsy..and totsy hotsy too..More than red chilli pepper paste upon melting bread.Very erotic ,sensual and sexy : )
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:43:00 AM
:) Lovely adjectives, Charmaine. I hope it does well in the contest. I don't join many contests, only those that move and inspire me and give me a chance to shine. Hope Rachel favors this. There are many great contenders. Oh well...at least I had fun writing it and choosing pics for it. These two pics are some of my favorite ones.
Date: 2/28/2015 4:01:00 AM
Dynamite never tasted so good! A max out managed with a tap out of sweet shout..."In breathless moans of sexied fame..." Mmmm...to strip you bare and fair, and give you solar flare, to ravage without a care...great erotica, and splendid rhyme. Erogenous blesses this bliss Eileen...J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/28/2015 5:41:00 AM
Justin, thanks for visiting me. I enjoyed writing this piece so much. I really hope it does well in the Hotsy Totsy contest. I started it some time ago, but didn't finish it till today. I tried to make it less....erotic and more....sensual. I don't know if I managed. I like the parts that spoke to you, Justin. To ravage without a care is an exquisite delight not afforded to many.
Date: 2/28/2015 3:13:00 AM
This one sizzles with deep passion... Very hotsy totsy....hugs Tim
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Date: 2/28/2015 3:16:00 AM
Thanks, Tim. Hope Rachel likes it. Had to find pics that go with the zones mentioned. I'm pleased. Hugs
Date: 2/28/2015 2:40:00 AM
Oh wow Eileen those errotic words are blazing hot! Wish you the best in the contest#7
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/28/2015 3:04:00 AM
Thanks, sweetie. I'm writing to the theme of the contest. Hope it does well. Hugs

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