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P.O.T.D, and first place in Contest of Chantelle Anne Cooke

Enraptured by blue Sea, Sun chose a place above Sea, on a cliff. To touch her face, Sun then sank low; final radiance fell, a lover's fingers on her mighty swell, with passion's touch her cobalt blue to trace. A last caress. . . and then with quickened pace arrived dark night with sable and black lace to softly drape the one he loves so well. . . enraptured by the sea. A man went to that cliff and pled for grace, for he had come with heart ache to erase. The sea, grown icy cold, still cast her spell. He knew that only she all pain could quell. Like Sun did too, he fell to her embrace enraptured by the sea April 21, 2022 Submitted June 12, 2022 for Mark Toney's 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 1 Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/16/2022 8:55:00 AM
Haunting and beautiful! Congratulations--Linda Craddick
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Date: 6/15/2022 12:35:00 PM
Dear Andrea, I am enraptured by the charming rhyme scheme, metaphorical beauty, the perfect personification and the vivid soulful imagery of this spectacular piece. Congratulations for your excellent wins in Chantelle's and Mark's contests and for POTD honors.. all so richly deserved, my friend. Such artistry! A fav! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/15/2022 9:23:00 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on this New win. A lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 6/14/2022 10:05:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your win on Mile 1 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon contest. Your poem is absolutely mesmerizing! Mile 2 is up and running!
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Date: 5/21/2022 2:27:00 AM
Wow!! Congratulations on p.o.t.d. and placing first in the contest, Andrea! This is personification at its best...going to my favs ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 5/18/2022 4:23:00 AM
The poem is written marvelously and the rhyme and rhythm are superb indeed. Does the man commit suicide at last or mentally he embraces the beauty of the sea? Here only I have a confusion, but I must applaud the wonderful way of penning a poem!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/18/2022 6:33:00 AM
he commits suicide. Thanks for your comment!
Date: 5/15/2022 4:10:00 PM
Oh wow, this is the kind of poetry I love. I just read it twice and got lost in it. Congrats on the trophy and POTD honors...going to my faves. Rhonda xx
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Date: 5/14/2022 2:02:00 PM
Love the black lace!
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Date: 5/9/2022 11:35:00 AM
Beautiful! I love personification, especially in nature poems.
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Date: 5/7/2022 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Date: 5/5/2022 10:04:00 AM
I love this, Andrea! Such a beautiful story you weave.
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Date: 5/3/2022 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea…..very gifted lady!! Debx
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Date: 5/2/2022 1:09:00 AM
Back with congrats Andrea on your top win and top of the best poems list. Tom
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Date: 5/1/2022 7:59:00 PM
Wow...this is wonderful. Great descriptions and universal story, beautifully expressed and realized. Congratulations - POTD !!
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Date: 4/29/2022 9:00:00 AM
An exceptional poem! Congrats on your POTD and win.
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Date: 4/28/2022 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your POTD. Pangie
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Date: 4/28/2022 2:32:00 AM
Gorgeous POTD and wonderful podium prize winner too! Fascinating from start to finish Andrea. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/27/2022 7:10:00 AM
Love it :) WOW. Congrats. Love and prayers and blessings too.. Gina
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Date: 4/26/2022 8:55:00 PM
WhoooooOW, Andrea, this is incredible. I am putting this in my favs. LOVE this!!! ~BJ
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Date: 4/26/2022 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Enraptured by Blue Sea" is a lovely write. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 4/25/2022 6:59:00 PM
Congratulations, again!
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Date: 4/25/2022 2:10:00 PM
congradulations on your well deserved win. Placing the sun where poetically God put it.
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Date: 4/25/2022 11:47:00 AM
Ah, circling back to congratulate you for the POTD, trophy win, and Best New Poem, a triple crown! I'm am always happy for your triumphs, dear friend, though I am never surprised. Have a great day, fish filet
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John Watt
Date: 5/4/2022 11:26:00 AM
I'm am? Sheesh, where did I learn to type? I just came back because I forgot to tell you earlier that this is going in my Favs.
Date: 4/25/2022 1:04:00 AM
Absolutely loving this. Many congratulations. I love sea and this composition reminds me of my poem the ringing sea. Congratulations
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Date: 4/24/2022 11:45:00 PM
A lovely poem
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