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Engulfed By the Tide

I lock up my Jeep and start down --- The narrow pathway --- ---That meanders down the edge of the cliff --- The view of the Ocean from this trail --- Is priceless This truly is one of my favorite places on Earth --- Every chance I get I try to make it back here --- And think of the time we spent together --- So long ago --- When life was still exciting --- We were young and the world was new --- And this spot was magic --- --- To us --- Barely even a spot to pull off the road --- We had to check it out --- The trail was rather rough --- If it could even be called a trail --- But we both knew in our hearts --- The risk would be worth it --- I’ll never forget how amazed we were --- When we reached the bottom --- Our own private cove --- Cut in half by the jagged rocks --- Connected by a cave --- I’ll never forget the love we shared --- --- That day --- The peace we felt that night --- The moon seemed as large --- As a silver dollar --- Setting on the end of our nose --- The reflection off the Sea --- The warmth of the bon-fire --- The sudden awakening --- To the rising tide --- How we scurried to get out of here --- And barely did --- Not long after that --- The tides of life --- Took you away --- ---Into the valley of death --- And I became so empty inside --- God I loved you so much --- And now here I am again --- With another Bouquet of Roses --- --- That I shall offer to the tide --- I want you to know --- I have found peace --- I have found love --- You and her are so much alike --- You were my first love --- And she is my last --- Sometimes I can see --- ---You --- With-in the confines of her heart --- And I almost feel ashamed --- But she is so much like you --- That to her it is an honor --- I’ll always love you – you know that ---You are my angel in the wind --- But she is forever --- --- The angel in my heart --- As I stop at the top of the Cliff --- I look back --- And watch the roses --- Become --- Engulfed by the tide --- I posted this poem for a second and then pulled it because it is very personal. Reposting for Christie's contest.

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Date: 3/22/2009 11:27:00 AM
Dear Mike, Congratulations on YOUR 2nd place win in Christie's Free Verse Fantasy Contest Such a Beautiful Tribute to YOUR MOM And YOUR Heartbeat, YOUR Soul, "The Angel in "YOUR" Heart" YOUR Wife I know of the LOVE YOU speak of YOURS ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/10/2009 8:59:00 AM
Congrats on the win on the Fantastic Free Verse contest! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 3/8/2009 12:03:00 PM
Dear Michael - Excellent & poignant storytelling in this captivating verse. Wishing you and your family a Happy & Blessed easter. Peace always, John
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Date: 3/8/2009 10:48:00 AM
This is one of your best, probably because you've put that personal feeling into it. Just an excellent write. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 3/8/2009 9:57:00 AM
Perfection..... loved this poem and its story of it all. Perfection.....
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Date: 3/7/2009 3:18:00 PM
I know it must have been hard to share this...but I'm glad you did. It's a great piece of writing Michael. It's good to hear you have peaceful closure and such an understanding woman in your life. Much love, Steve
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Date: 3/7/2009 4:01:00 AM
It is a painful, yet beautiful memory, I go to my first love,my guardian angel, through the cemetery gates, and down the winding road, but my new love, is so much the same, yet different, I can relate very much to your powerful words.. Spirit and Soul, Constance
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Date: 3/6/2009 11:21:00 PM
A great write Micheal...Thank you for sharing... Always, Farah
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Date: 3/6/2009 1:53:00 PM
Wow. What a tribute to both your loves..Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 3/6/2009 1:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Christie's contest, Michael, for this wonderful piece! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/6/2009 12:10:00 PM
Hi Michael,, congratulations on your win... well deserved my friend.... great stuff !
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Date: 3/6/2009 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations dear Michael on your big win in Christie's contest! Absolutely brilliant and touching and beyond well deserved! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/6/2009 7:52:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Christie's contest Michael.Rgds Brian Your courage has brought its reward.Have a good weekend
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Date: 3/6/2009 7:09:00 AM
This is so touching, I feel so sad and yet happy for you - I know this poem well, it is amazing, and I too, my beautiful friend, am honored to share this place with you - none better. :) Excellent writing, you are great at free verse, Kristin
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Date: 3/6/2009 7:07:00 AM
Ramble on whenever you like brother.. your words are amazing to read and they move me.. such an incredible life. Much love, homie.
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Date: 3/6/2009 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations dear neighbor!! Excellent win in this amazing contest, and as always, you wrote a terrific entry!! great job!! love< Carrie!
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Date: 3/6/2009 6:01:00 AM
absolutely beautiful!! such a clever write... on memories... and congrats! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/5/2009 5:07:00 PM
Hi MIchael, I should have wrote fictional..I'm a tee-totaler...never did never will! Thanks for the advice...it's solid!-Always Alexandra
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Date: 3/5/2009 12:21:00 AM
Memories are what make us who we are. Well done, and thank your dear heart for allowing us to read this. Peace Fathima
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Date: 3/4/2009 9:16:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful, Michael! Your words flow smoothly in this tender, heartrending write. Thank you for sharing this lovely poetry and good luck in the contest! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/4/2009 2:20:00 PM
Beautiful memories and how fortunate you are Michael to have found another love!! I saw this quote and thought of you ... its by MLKing: "Our lives begin to end the day we become silent about things that matter." Good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 3/4/2009 3:21:00 AM
Michael, sometimes love of the passionate kind does not last, and instead we have a lasting friendship, I have seen this happen many times/ I wish you all the happiness with your new love, and new does not mean recent love, you could have loved her 10 years, and it still be new. Thank you for commenting on my work, there is a story behind that poem. I sat in a courtroom yesterday, and I thought I was at an auction. Shocked is the proper word at how many need help, and will never get it, F/F
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Date: 3/4/2009 12:29:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks or your kind words
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Date: 3/3/2009 10:27:00 PM
This is truly a piece of who you are. So rare that we are able to open up and love how lucky you are to find it twice. I know this is hard for you to post but it is healing to do so. Thank you so much as I too have lost a true love and not so long ago. I have moved on and have found love but I will never forget him. Your words will help others in healing as well. Thank you for your comments on my work and for sharing your beautiful love story. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/3/2009 10:09:00 PM
Michael this is wonderful and intimate and raw. Thank you for posting it. It is hard to bare private feelings but it touches me in a special way. I lost my first love at a far too young age. But we go on. Thank you for taking the time to comment on my piece. love, Joyce
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