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Endless Waves

Lace curtains flutter on ocean breezes cool upon our skin, softly soothing beneath star light glistened wishes Moon beams outline shadows on the wall, two floating visions surrendering to the rhythm of endless waves, hibiscus white with foam Steady, smooth melodic movements, coastal harmonies sung in sighed desires echo beyond blushing balconies As slumbering sandcastles are swept away from a silent shore by the frenzied surf as the evening tide comes again

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Date: 10/1/2019 12:54:00 PM
Ah your memory lane is amazing as always! I love strolling down it! Amazing Chris!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/1/2019 1:39:00 PM
Thank you Brenda. I am happy you have found some of my older poems to enjoy. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 12/2/2016 12:14:00 PM
Nothing like the sound of the surf for such a beautiful inspiration, Chris:)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 12:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Daniel, that's for sure or should I say shore? :)
Date: 12/2/2016 9:10:00 AM
A light and airy feel to this one.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 10:06:00 AM
Thanks so much again Richard. I am thrilled you like this one
Date: 12/2/2016 8:46:00 AM
Lovely ...I can hear the sound of the frenzied.surf..as the evening tide rolls again.
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Date: 12/2/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thanks so very much my sweet friend. I am happy my poetry touches you as it does. I appreciate you Charmaine.
Date: 12/2/2016 12:11:00 AM
I like the flowing feel, seemingly effortless.
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Date: 12/2/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Faith, I appreciate your visit and your kind thought today.
Date: 12/1/2016 7:22:00 PM
Another romantic view you paint...lovely
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 8:52:00 AM
Thanks so very much Tim for all of your kind words.
Date: 12/1/2016 7:20:00 PM
Chris, how do you contain it all? And I know you don't simply do that - you share, give, relate, state, portray, instruct with the best of them. I guess I'm asking for a philosophical statement, perhaps of your existence related to all else in our world (and possibly vice-versa). Probably best done in a poem, anyway. For now, massive kudos.
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Date: 12/2/2016 8:52:00 AM
Let's see...I see things in a different way/ when I open up my eyes each day/ and when those sights then find my pen/ I've no choice but to write again. How's that? :) Thanks my friend.
Date: 12/1/2016 7:20:00 PM
I love poems about the sea and about dusk as well. this is so beautiful.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 8:44:00 AM
Then I am happy you stopped by tonight. :) Thanks so very much Andrea.
Date: 12/1/2016 6:54:00 PM
Love to listen to the melodic movement of the waves. Did so last week on my trip to Vancouver. love phyl
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 8:44:00 AM
I appreciate your kind words Phyllis. I've never been to Vancouver but I hear it is absolutely beautiful there.
Date: 12/1/2016 6:53:00 PM
You have the pen going with these flowing words now, Chris! Nice one.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thanks so very much Heidi. I just let my mind take a vacation at the beach for a few hours today. :)
Date: 12/1/2016 6:40:00 PM
A definite seven from me! loved it!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 8:42:00 AM
Thanks so much again my friend.
Date: 12/1/2016 6:28:00 PM
Beautiful Chris. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 8:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Gary. I am glad you liked this one.

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