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End of the Road

End Of The Road (Why Did Wine And Music Thus Lose) Wine and music soothed our joined souls when ebb tides washed away. We set fame and wealth as our goals found not in Frisco bay! When quick passions our lost souls ate clear waters could not stay. Nothing stopped darkest Hands of Fate should we have thought to pray? Where loving-sight lost its clear views good no longer danced. We both fell, forgetting our dues gone was life we romanced! Why did wine and music thus lose to Fate we did not choose? Jan. 6th, 2017 For- Poet's Choice - The End Of The Road - Just Friends - Poetry Contest Rhyme Scheme - abab, cdcd, etc. Syllable count : 8-6-8-6 Nicola Byrne : Contest sponsor

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Date: 1/19/2017 7:20:00 AM
Sadly, making the right choices does not always result in the outcome we expect. Nice write Robert.
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Date: 1/18/2017 7:59:00 PM
Sorry. I had forgotten that this poem was entered in a contest. Thanks to all for the comments!
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Date: 1/15/2017 8:44:00 PM
A well-deserved win, dear Robert! Congratulations! Pandita
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Date: 1/8/2017 5:11:00 PM
This is such an excellent piece written by you, great poet! It's sure to win a high placement! Beautifully done and a 7! Pandita
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Date: 1/7/2017 7:06:00 AM
How wise our Lord is when He has chosen to hide the future events from our sight! Inspiring and spiritual my friend, Robert. A seven!
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Date: 1/6/2017 4:32:00 PM
destiny lies in some sacred realm unseen... a truly amazing write from you, robert!.. huggs
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Date: 1/6/2017 1:46:00 PM
Don't we make our own fate, Robert, just as we choose our destiny? I believe we always have a choice. I think most religious people call it "freewill" Great poem! Well written.
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Date: 1/6/2017 1:20:00 PM
If only we could predict the outcome of things, we'd probably waste a whole lot less time. Really cool Robert.
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Date: 1/6/2017 12:52:00 PM
- No one can determine or predict the fate, Robert - A great poem - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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