Elixir

raining remedy welcomed with watered wisdom elixir of earth ============================================== Entry: "Nature Haiku With Alliteration" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin January 19, 2022 (4)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2022 4:02:00 PM

Very nice one, Andy! oh, and congrats on the win.

Andy Chunn
Date: 5/1/2022 7:53:00 PM

Thank you...sorry to be slow in responding.

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/24/2022 8:59:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Andy Chunn
Date: 1/28/2022 6:39:00 AM

Thank you Beata.....I appreciate your kind words. Your poetry is inspiring to me. Keep up the good work.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/24/2022 10:25:00 AM

Truly, rain is the "elixir" of earth. Just delightful Andy. Congrats and high fives for your win!

Andy Chunn
Date: 1/24/2022 2:46:00 PM

Thanks Sam....and right back at you. 10 W's in a row. Active alert alliteration! Nicely done.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/24/2022 9:21:00 AM

Wow! Wonderful. Congratulations!

Andy Chunn
Date: 1/24/2022 2:47:00 PM

Thank you for the feedback Christuraj. Much appreciated.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/24/2022 8:39:00 AM

Andy, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku, nice alliteration and loved the last line!

Andy Chunn
Date: 1/24/2022 2:49:00 PM

Thank you, Tania, for sponsoring the contest and doing the footwork to make it happen. I love the haiku form. Your contest was much fun.