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Elated In Moonlight

Hazy lavender imprints of a fortress, sempiternal electric clouds drift as simple words speak within in vast dimensions my mind wanders in starlight resting in calm love the Autumn moon full with dreams poetic words lightly I chant

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2016 4:41:00 PM

In < ten lines you have created magic with this winner…Way to go poet friend..Congrats on you being in the winners’ list..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/6/2011 11:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/5/2011 2:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win x

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/4/2011 2:13:00 PM

Great write, Rick! Congratulations on a very fine win. Love, Annalise

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/4/2011 10:06:00 AM

"Electric clouds drift". Great line Rick. Congratulations

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/3/2011 7:19:00 PM

great a new word sempiternal! Congrad''s Light & Love

Kash Poet

Date: 11/26/2011 4:06:00 AM

Wonderful!!Best wishes.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/23/2011 10:59:00 AM

Wonderful poem you have penned. Good luck in the contest. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2011 8:53:00 PM

wonderful how you made it spiritual, Rick. The judge should be well pleased.

Tim B

Date: 11/22/2011 3:20:00 PM

This one left me speechless, very mystical and what a way to open it up with words like vast and wanders.

John Rhinem

Date: 11/22/2011 3:11:00 PM

Smile, You Are An Artist In More Lights Than One I Can Surely See For, You Write So Very Beautifully * And Yesss, Pure Love Is Soothing Ointment Upon These Hearts So Blessed to Share Its Magnificent Treasures * Very Beautiful * My Luv Always, John!:) *