Ego and Demiurgic Soul

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We are on a unique journey to opine around God, In a private chapel, mosque, or any schrod, Notwithstanding outward, the conscious ego is lurking, A kindred spirit that stays inside, and is murking. Our inner selves should be set to the moral side, Assuming that God's revelations we must find, This is the rather proper thing we should believe, The atman is uniquely the most foe risk deceive. The inner self becomes an integral factor first, The nominative pronouns "I" and "me" seem curst, It is a particularly prevailing power in the world, God is impossible for us to be reliably found. Ego causes body and mind agony, God is within yet has no holy anatomy. Written: June 30th, 2022 Ego Shorn, Here Now Reborn Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/3/2022 8:37:00 AM

Very deep and mindful poem, my friend. Another great entry for the contest. The ego has been one of my biggest challenges and obstacles to my spiritual growth and maturity. Hopefully I've made significant progress over the last 65 years. Thanks for sharing your gift of poetry with us, Lasaad. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Valsa George

Date: 7/1/2022 9:06:00 PM

Ego is the one thing that causes agony to not only the body and mind but to the whole of humanity. Ego is the root cause of most of the wars and rebellions. If we dispense with ego, we will be able to see God's revelations in a better light ! A highly spiritual writing, wise and inspirational. All the Best in the contest dear Lasaad !

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/1/2022 4:17:00 PM

God lives within us despite of our human anatomy dear Sotto, how beautiful it is to live down under with our eyes and soul's to the stars , lovely and wise your words ring true to me. Thank you for sharing, have a blessed day.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/1/2022 8:33:00 PM

Thank you so much dear, Rose. I really appreciate your encouraging words. I'm happy you like it and it means a lot to me. Blessings and hugs

Michael Tor

Date: 7/1/2022 3:24:00 PM

Lasaad your insight is worthy of recognition. If I may state, "Wisdom at it's best", I am moved by your words my friend. God bless you and thank you for sharing...

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/1/2022 8:31:00 PM

In point of fact, each one of us has a very special quality, and we are all worthy of being acknowledged for the Caring Souls that we are. I really value and appreciate everything that you've mentioned. I hope that Connie will recover quickly and return back here ASAP.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/1/2022 4:58:00 AM

An inspiring and illuminating poem displaying the inner and outer self and, at the same time, indicating the road to follow, my friend, Lasaad! Excellent profound work! Blessings!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/1/2022 4:36:00 AM

Much depth to your discourse on ego and soul ---and the path to enlightenment. Best to you Lasaad.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/1/2022 2:29:00 AM

I hope more poets read this elegant sonnet. You are a great poet.