Ego

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Ego: The tip of consciousness' iceberg That Likes to take credit For All that the unseen 9/10 of consciousness Is achieving! © Demetrios Trifiatis 21 November 2018

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/25/2018 5:51:00 PM

Hello Demetrios, you got the ego described very well. Have a nice evening my friend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/21/2018 10:59:00 AM

How true, the unsung heroes the nine tenths do most of the work. Tom.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/21/2018 11:33:00 AM

Yes, they do the vast amount of work my friend, Tom but Ego being an egoist tries to profit! Thank you very much!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/21/2018 8:31:00 AM

Golden pen! A fave :))) hugs n' love xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/21/2018 11:31:00 AM

How kind of you my dearest fiend, Maureen ! Thank you for your generosity! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/21/2018 5:51:00 AM

- There is power in these lines, well done my friend :) - Is it possible that selfish actions are motivated by a self-image that is incorrect in relation to reality? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/21/2018 11:28:00 AM

Thank you for your gracious comment dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx