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Effervescence

I am here now Presence my companion Rising I put my two feet On the ground I give thanks as I open my eyes To this new day A divine delicious smile Trickles upward animating my mouth How glorious to be here At this moment in time Sacred simplicity guiding me A gift to inhabit this body Having the depth of consciousness To appreciate tiny nuances Wonderous offerings Arriving on sunlight’s crown The gift of vison, heart, and soul Awaken effervescent bubbles Gratitude’s golden silk Tickling my tender skin Footprints of change Always in motion Mapped out before me A constant ripple in a Reflective glistening pool Closing my eyes I see you by the campfire Gold crusted amber glow Sculpting your face Lips parted slightly Dancing shadows on your forehead I long for you A deep belly laugh Tears brim my eyes Remembering that magical moment Illuminating our shared joy The rising sparks from the fire Unleash memories deep Within my molten core A baby crying in the distance The vibrations encompassing me The slow steady drumbeats of our ancestors An opportunity to dig down To release old wounds Only I have the key Fly away ... I have no need for you Gliding on newborn mist Born in ocean’s womb Rising to great heights Arriving in the world of tomorrow I kiss the salt-stained cheeks Of the wounded Lending a helping hand To the downtrodden Walking through the valley before me I marvel at the weathered cliffs Crags and crevices plunging Down.....down Spooning riverbanks A gentle sway Waters lapping luxuriously Without a care or want A twinkle awakens Teardrop tapestries weaving light On water’s surface Mystical movement Its sheen seeding love and purpose Deep into my heart A beckoning call from cliff’s crest A cradling chant infuses itself Into my being Kai kai kai ooo har Kai kai kai Passion riding on desire’s whisper Cloaked in lavender silk Sounds so full and rich I cannot resist receiving them I feel the heat rise up I see gathered before me Life ~ Love ~ Loss ~ and Rebirth A joyous silken rain woven by Goddess spiders Threads of compassion Pulsating in iridescent Lime, turquoise, and peach We all pause The multitudes of mankind The creatures of light and sound The furry beasts The winged ones Gazing up we raise our arms Towards pale violet clouds Winks, half smiles and collective breath are shared Bursting into song We open our hearts in unison and Capture the quenching raindrops In our mouths A gift from above connecting us all In a shared embrace. Susan Lawrence copyright 2022

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Date: 12/17/2022 3:12:00 PM
A buttery smooth read, with captivating imagery penned with feeling. Very nice.
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 12/19/2022 7:16:00 AM
Hi M.L. - Grateful for your visit . I am happy you could take this journey with me . Susan :)
Date: 10/30/2022 5:26:00 PM
"I give thanks as I open my eyes to this new day." This thought curls softly around my heart. I'm so thankful for all the many blessings that surround me. Tender, beautiful and serene, are moments within your poetry. My best to you, Susan. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 11/2/2022 6:08:00 AM
Dear Brandy , Your words and heart are so appreciated. I love your way with words and how you express yourself . Thank you for your insight and comments. Hugs to you, Susan :)
Date: 10/7/2022 2:50:00 AM
Undoubtedly I’m slipping for I didn’t see this marvellous work earlier, so happy to see it on the top 100 poems list. A fav, of course!
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 10/7/2022 1:02:00 PM
Thank you Unseeking Seeker! I am honored by your visit and fav ! I appreciate your presence always. Susan :)
Date: 9/30/2022 4:31:00 AM
I really enjoyed this spectacular write, Susan. I'm surprised it didn't get a POTD recognition.
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Date: 9/30/2022 5:34:00 AM
Edward, in gratitude for your visit and lovely words. Thank you ! So happy to journey with you . Blessings, Susan :)
Date: 9/24/2022 6:10:00 AM
the depths herein so exquisitely defined....you have brought the wonder of it all into view
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Date: 10/13/2022 7:15:00 AM
Dearest Timothy. I am finally responding to your lovely comments. In gratitude for your presence and participation. Susan :)
Date: 9/20/2022 10:40:00 AM
Susan, you have a real way with words! Charmingly crafted. In particular, I enjoyed reading the last stanza which has lot of strength. Thank you for sharing this poem.
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Date: 9/20/2022 4:10:00 PM
Hello Irfanulla, Such a treat to have you visit my page ! Thank you for your kind words and taking this journey with me. Blessings, Susan :)
Date: 9/10/2022 1:26:00 AM
What an outstanding write pouring out from your talented ink dear Susan... Such an insightful poem that awakens our soul and reminds us to live for the moment: the effervescent moments of happiness... Great imagery with descriptions... Enjoyed reading beautiful heart... Have a lovely day dear friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/20/2022 7:48:00 AM
Dear Ani, So very happy to have your visit and kind heart and lovely soul and presence here! I have missed reading your poems. Life has been so very busy in the good ways. Sending love and looking forward to more of you ! Hugs always, Susan :)
Date: 9/6/2022 3:46:00 PM
This is so very descriptive, Susan. I love lines such as this one here that I copied: Gratitude’s golden silk Tickling my tender skin Gorgeous!
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Date: 9/20/2022 7:46:00 AM
Dear Andrea, So very thankful for your visit and comments. I have missed being here and reading your poems ! I look forward to more of your lovely work soon ! Hugs and love, Susan :)
Date: 9/6/2022 11:46:00 AM
Oh my dearest Susan, if only your beautiful vision could come to be; "We all pause / The multitudes of mankind /The creatures of light and sound" to all share in a "collective breath" to soothe our hearts, to drink quenching raindrops to cleanse the dust from our tongues in celebration of love, to share a soul embrace of unity under "pale violet clouds".. I adore this amazing deep journey to the all-encompassing destination, I hope we all arrive there, my sweet poetry sister. With you I soar into new realms of time and space, heart and spirit, hope and love and endless possibilities. The Universe is truly ours when on the wings of your magnificent words. Exquisite effervescence! My gratitude for your precious poetry glows like "golden silk". Warmest wishes, love and hugs.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/20/2022 7:45:00 AM
Dearest Susan, Now it is my turn to apologize for my tardy reply to your wonderful visit and comments. Life has been busy busy...as you say in all of the good ways. I have missed being here. So very wonderful to have the grace of your spirit and visit. It is a gift to know you and read your words. I have missed you and your poetry. Thank you for flying with me once again into infinite realms of possibility. With love and gratitude, Susan xx :)
Date: 9/4/2022 8:42:00 AM
What a beautiful poem! I can feel every word.
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/5/2022 7:46:00 PM
Hi Christuraj, So happy you could feel the words. What a lovely thing to say. Blessings, Susan :)
Date: 9/3/2022 5:51:00 AM
Captured by the "Divine delicious smile" of your words, I journeyed with you enjoying the unfolding connection as one with you and all of nature! This writing is magnificent Susan! I definitely feel the embrace! Happy Saturday xxoo
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Date: 9/5/2022 7:42:00 PM
Mike... I love your passion and how you express yourself! Thrilled you could journey with me again. So much fun to have you along ! Thank you, big hugs xx Susan :)
Date: 9/3/2022 4:40:00 AM
From the very start of day till late at night, you notice and appreciate the delightful gifts of life, Susan, whether tiny or big. They capture your attention, heart, mind and soul. Most of all, uplifted by the magnetic force or words, we are pleasantly compelled to participate and share. ~ Warm regards and hugs, my friend. // paul
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Date: 9/5/2022 7:40:00 PM
Hello dear Paul, Such a treat to have you visit, and to read these loving comments. You are such a wonderful spirit to accompany me on this poetic and life journey. I am thrilled to have you with me . Big hugs and blessings my friend, Susan :)
Date: 9/2/2022 7:06:00 AM
Oh, how i love being taken on your journeys Susan, taken to the extremes of emotions, corners of the planet and the wide open spaces of the cosmos....Thanks so lovely to read poetry as good as this...
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/2/2022 11:39:00 AM
Harry, Your presence is a gift. Thank you for journeying with me to all of theses places. It is so much fun to have you along for the ride! Hugs to you ! Susan :)
Date: 9/1/2022 6:59:00 PM
The ending was so inspirational Susan, "A gift from above connecting us all In a shared embrace." Wonderful way to end this wonderfully written Poem. Reading all the wonderful comments reflects how uplifting your Poetry is. Truly enjoyed reading and it is a Favorite for me. Keep on writing and God bless you...
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/2/2022 11:37:00 AM
Michael, I have enjoyed your inspirational poems. You have a big heart and soul. Thank you for your visit. I am honored by your comments and fav. Sending love and blessings to you. Susan :)
Date: 9/1/2022 12:35:00 AM
Dearest Susan, every new entry of yours is an anticipated event... this latest trek through life, mind, earth, and soul is another one for the scrapbook, telling your story as only you can. "Life ~ Love ~ Loss ~ and Rebirth" distills so much of our existence into a gemstone of compacted truth. All of this is so gorgeous and so real. Thank you for sharing the journey, a fave and a thousand smiles. Effervescent blessings! ~ John
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/2/2022 11:26:00 AM
Dearest John, I am so thrilled to have your visit and lovely comments and honored by your fav! You are always such an inspiration. I am so happy we can share this poetic journey together. Thank you my friend. Hugs and blessings and a thousand smiles back to you !! Susan :)
Date: 8/31/2022 2:44:00 PM
A beautiful poem of unity and harmony. A great attitude to start each morning. I loved the imagery and the use of many colors. Your words are uplifting and welcoming. A FAV for my list my dear friend, Susan. Thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts through your eloquent poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings ~ Hugs Bill
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/2/2022 11:19:00 AM
Dearest Bill, You are so full of life and love. I appreciate your visit and comments and honored by your fav. You appreciate the colors and nuances of life which is so very wonderful. Big hugs and blessings my friend. Susan :)
Date: 8/31/2022 11:13:00 AM
A purifying ritual, the chant..."Keeper of the keys; earth" the cliffs...the beckoning, I was enraptured with a romantic reverie, the whole experience captured with justified ardor. It was an honor to have read your poetry Susan Lawrence. I Am Anaya
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/2/2022 11:14:00 AM
Anaya, You grace my page with your presence and lovely comments. I am humbled. Thank you for mind and heart. I appreciate you taking the journey with me. Blessings, Susan :)
Date: 8/31/2022 11:11:00 AM
Sent on sunlight,s crown, that to me speaks of a heavenly gift sent to further inspire brilliance. As is so evident by the rest of this wonderful creation A favorite and a gem. God bless..
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/2/2022 10:00:00 AM
Dearest Robert, Thank you my friend for your visit and comments. I am humbled by your words and grateful for your favorite. Sending you continued inspiration and beauty in your life and on your poetic journey. Blessings to you, Susan :)
Date: 8/30/2022 8:06:00 AM
Dear Susan, This is so gorgeous. I feel beautiful by your words...gratitude's golden silk, born in ocean's womb, teardrop tapestries...I bathe in them and feel cleansed. Thank you, dearheart, for writing them.
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/31/2022 10:41:00 AM
Dear Ann, I am so full with your light. How lovely of you to visit and comment this way. I am in gratitude for your kind words. Thank you dear one for your presence. I appreciate you. Hugs and blessings, Susan :)
Date: 8/30/2022 4:55:00 AM
Deep into mindfulness is your spiritual soul.. diving into the beauty of insight.. drinking from the bountiful well of Love.. quenching your passionate heart with well earned gifts.. Dear Susan and sweet friend, walking your unique path of poetry is a wondrous journey that awakens the soul and fills the heart with gleeful sentiments! I so much relish in the dimensions your words have created and reached! Always an immense pleasure seeing and reading you.. Love and hugs. God bless you..
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Date: 8/31/2022 10:39:00 AM
Dearest Besma, Your presence is a gift . I am so grateful for your words and insight and deep heart. I send big hugs and love. I look forward to reading more of your beautiful soul soon ! Your heart shines so bright. Blessings to you and yours, Susan :)
Date: 8/28/2022 7:14:00 PM
Susan, you are here with a heart brimming with gratitude for each new day and the pleasurable sensations life offers. The moments of love shared around a campfire, your resolve to extend a helping hand to the needy, your desire to embrace the elements and your exhortation to all to pair as one team in a shared embrace.... all so beautifully touched upon. As ever, another marvel from your pen.
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/29/2022 11:10:00 AM
Valsa, Your gift of insight is vast and your heart so full. I enjoy your presence and participation very much. A gift you are. Looking forward to more of your beautiful words soon. Thank you for your visit !Hugs, Susan :)
Date: 8/28/2022 6:18:00 PM
Susan writes 'long;' Gershon writes 'short.' They'll meet in the middle with proper transport. Smiles, Gershon
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/29/2022 11:08:00 AM
Yes we two shall meet in the middle ! Susan :)
Date: 8/28/2022 4:19:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your work. Sometimes we forget to be thankful for all of life, but I read here in your work how you are thankful for life and another day. I can say that this poem exemplifies the fact that we should be thankful for even for the smallest to the largest of God's creations in this world and the universe. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 8/29/2022 11:08:00 AM
Dear Sara, I so appreciate your visit and your wonderful response to my poem. Each moment is a gift. Sometimes we get so caught up in the hustle and business of life that it is hard to remember. I try to hear the silence and the moments in-between and glean energy, courage and hope through this simple act of being still. Blessings to you, Susan :)
Date: 8/28/2022 7:25:00 AM
A fascinating hymn to life, dearest Susan. A fave for me. Blessings!
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/28/2022 7:34:00 AM
Thank you dear Demetrios! In gratitude for your presence and honored by your fave ! Blessings, Susan :)
Date: 8/28/2022 2:46:00 AM
What a dazzling poem you wrote. How I wish I could inherit some of your joyful attitude.
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/28/2022 6:54:00 AM
Fly with me Victor anytime ! Thank you my friend . I appreciate your participation and presence . Blessings, Susan :)
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