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Ecstasy

Amber rays seeping through the grey woods Blending with the glimmering mist Crystal white floating wool packs conceal Dazzling Diamonds time to time Elegantly gowned in white silk Fairies dancing beneath Glittering golden moon High above the trees Immense ecstasy

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2013 12:42:00 AM

I really loved the pattern you gave this one. It really enhanced it, and the images here are really pretty.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2013 11:41:00 AM

- Proficient Manel .... ABC poem is not easy to write. - Well done! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 5/25/2013 12:00:00 PM

Yes it is difficult but this is a challenge. Thank you Lisa. I love your puppy haiku

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/25/2013 11:00:00 AM

No it's not too long! When I write ABC I typically go through the whole alphabet, A-Z, so no worries!

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 5/25/2013 12:01:00 PM

Thanks Tim. Really appreciate.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/25/2013 6:20:00 AM

Bravo, you have penned a lovely romantic poem. I agree with Tim it has a whimsical feel. I hope you enter it into the contest.

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 5/25/2013 10:38:00 AM

Thank you. You are very generous

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/25/2013 5:02:00 AM

Choreography of sentences dancing in unison! Excellent!

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 5/25/2013 10:39:00 AM

Thank you my dear!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/24/2013 11:14:00 PM

It's very whimsical writing, Manel. And I enjoy the neat little shape you have created (almost like a teacup that's been slightly chipped on the right side). I think the strongest lines were the first two... enjoyed!

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 5/25/2013 10:40:00 AM

Thanks Tim. I enjoy all your poems.