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Eclipse

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Eclipse

I witnessed every single day
the sun and the moon disappear 
too slow or  too fast
behind  mountains or rivers
horizons with trees
and too often
watched  it all
sink into so many lakes
and far away seas

I experienced
lunar and solar eclipses 
heartbreaking moments 
in which their lights
disappeared
sometimes into another yesterday  
too often in the darkest dark night

it’s a great gift of life
not feeling blinded 
being able to see 

someway
somehow
somewhere
all those different lights
have been collecting
their forces
to shine
their light
on me 
and my  beautiful world of today

©Ellie Daphne van Stralen 

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  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:26:00 AM
    Am a skywatcher myself.. also follow the eclipse star showers, are even grander... good write

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 11/25/2012 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    The view and everything behind ..... 'all of this" made it even more impressive....... Glad you noticed! :+) Ellie Daphne