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Echoes of Love

Let me O love, to love With my heart, throng with love When life, sketching shades of sundown Kiss me.. Once more sit side by side my bed With tears, I'll clean my eyes And trace echoes, Let me Honorable Mention in STRAND PICK G,ANY THEME,ANY FORM Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/4/2020 1:11:00 AM

Simply Excellent. Hugs

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/4/2020 3:18:00 AM

Thank you Anisha..

Mohan Chutani

Date: 5/3/2020 11:14:00 PM

Jenish, a beauty. Mohan

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/4/2020 12:06:00 AM

Thank you Mohan..

Eve Roper

Date: 5/2/2020 12:54:00 AM

Stunning example, Jenish. Hugs Eve

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/2/2020 7:35:00 AM

Thank you Eve..

Funom Makama

Date: 4/29/2020 10:55:00 PM

Oh my! I love this to the letter. Nice and romantic. Well expressed

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/30/2020 12:47:00 AM

Thank you Funom.. Have a great day..

Paul Callus

Date: 4/29/2020 5:42:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Jenish! It oozes sentiments and pure emotions. Usually a Cinquain consists of 5 lines, so this would probably be a mirror cinquain. ~ Regards // paul

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/30/2020 12:46:00 AM

Thank you Paul.. It is a Butterfly Cinquain.. A variation to the standard one.. Having 9 lines.. Takecare..

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/28/2020 7:01:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this truth on genuine love that indeed exists; likewise exemplified and intensified by the photo that comes with it. God bless you. Thanks also for my placement in your recently-concluded contest.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/29/2020 11:20:00 AM

Thank you so much Beata.. Takecare always.. Also thank you for your beautiful entry in my Haiku contest..

Lonna Blodgett

Date: 4/28/2020 3:48:00 PM

I am so very impressed with your use of the words / Let me / It speaks to me as a high understanding of how we establish trust in the act of love. This is such a great example.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/29/2020 11:19:00 AM

Thank you so much for your support.. Takecare always..

Jan Allison

Date: 4/28/2020 12:30:00 PM

pure poetry and I love the way it looks like a butterflies wings:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/29/2020 11:18:00 AM

Thank you Jan for your kind words.. Takecare always..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/28/2020 8:25:00 AM

A masterpiece of a Cinquain my dearest , Jenish, ( sorry)Impressively done! Hugs xxx Take care!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/28/2020 8:53:00 AM

Sandra? My dear Demetrios, I'm Jenish.. Anyway thank you.. What is there in a name..

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/28/2020 7:22:00 AM

This poem is amazing. Very well written Jenish :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/28/2020 8:13:00 AM

Thank you Heidi for your kind words.. Takecare..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 4/28/2020 5:18:00 AM

Pure poetry, I would love to be able to write poetry like that. My heart feels it, sadly it doesn't flow to my pen lol. I have tried to pen a cinquain. I don't think I have understood how it's done properly. It was after I read your lovely poem that inspired me to try.....Thank you Jenish

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/28/2020 8:12:00 AM

Your words are like a contest win for me.. Thank you for your unconditional support.. Takecare always..