East Jesus

Picture 1 the message is sent loud and clear to the four winds nobody listens Picture 2 the whirlwind roars past leaving in its wake havoc and broken spirits Picture 4 drinking to old age drowning memories in wine that has gone sour Picture 5 racing against time in youthful exuberance life turns to ruins Picture 7 sought eternal fame now, imprisoned in stardom she pleads for freedom ---------------------------------------------------------- Contest: East Jesus Sponsor: Roy Jerden Placed: 6th

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Robert Johnson

Date: 1/24/2015 11:25:00 PM

Pearls of wisdom Paul. Lessons for all to learn. Very eloquently expressed. Kudo's. Peace. :)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/25/2015 4:50:00 AM

Thank you for the visit and lovely comments, Robert. Have a nice day! // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/6/2015 1:46:00 PM

an array of remarkable lines I simply adore, paul..I iike all the vignettes!..many congrats!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/6/2015 2:11:00 PM

Many thanks Nette! I'm so glad you enjoyed; Your take on picture 7 was excellent! All the best. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/4/2015 5:53:00 AM

COngratz PAul.. :)! need i say more.. treat me to a....................................... please some food that is crunchy! lol..

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2015 7:39:00 AM

Thank you Olive_eloi! After the festive season it's hard to find good, healthy food to eat....perhaps some dark chocolate might do the trick:) hugs // paul

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/3/2015 7:56:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2015 7:40:00 AM

Many thanks Debbie! All the best for 2015. // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/3/2015 6:08:00 AM

Congrats on the the win with this fine take on the theme, Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 1/3/2015 8:00:00 AM

Thank you Dr. You too have started the year on a high note! // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/2/2015 11:54:00 PM

Paul, Interesting topic, poem and win. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Goodnight ~LINDA~

Paul Callus
Date: 1/3/2015 8:13:00 AM

Hi Linda! Thank you :) Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 8:10:00 PM

I see you won this one. BIg congrats!!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/3/2015 7:48:00 AM

Thank you Andrea; not a bad start to the new year! // paul

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 1/2/2015 7:16:00 PM

congratulations Paul nice write, enjoyed it

Paul Callus
Date: 1/3/2015 8:11:00 AM

Thank you Robert; pleased you enjoyed. All the best. // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/2/2015 1:59:00 PM

Hi Paul, stopping back to congratulate you for your win! This was one of my favorites! Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 1/2/2015 2:58:00 PM

Very kind of you Sandra; you showed faith in these senryus from day one! Thank you:) // paul

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/2/2015 12:38:00 PM

Wow Paul you took a very unique approach to this challenge. Very creative! Congratulations on your win.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/2/2015 1:52:00 PM

Thank you Armand! Took a gamble and it did not backfire completely! All the best. // paul

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/2/2015 11:19:00 AM

Congrats Paul for a Job well done,have a joyful Weekend...huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 1/2/2015 1:50:00 PM

Same to you Kayode...thank you! I see you're again on the podium! Well done. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 10:37:00 AM

Many congrats on your win Paul great to read these little gems again:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2015 2:10:00 PM

** blushes ** I didnt get anywhere with my gods of wind - guess my humour wasn't appropriate there - can't win em all lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 1/2/2015 1:46:00 PM

Thank you for coming back with congrats, Jan! You did very well with your sexy limerick! :) hugs // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/2/2015 10:10:00 AM

Congrats on awesome senryus n a wonderful win Paul! Hv missed reading many marvels last few days! Thnx for ur visits to my page wid very delicious words! Wishing u n ur family a very happy n prosperous new year!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/2/2015 1:44:00 PM

Hi Upma....hope the new year has welcomed you with warm and open arms! May it be a happy one for you and all your loved ones. Glad you enjoyed these senryus...and thank you for a lovely visit! // paul

Joseph May

Date: 1/2/2015 9:56:00 AM

Great write and win Paul...congrats

Paul Callus
Date: 1/2/2015 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. Hope the new year has greeted you with a smile! All the best. // paul

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/31/2014 6:21:00 PM

Happy new year Paul the great,goodluk in the contest...huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 1/1/2015 8:20:00 AM

Many thanks Kayode!! Your comments always bring a smile to my face:) You're always in high spirits...that's a good sign..bless you! hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/31/2014 2:16:00 PM

Shall i congratulate you now? Well done! Happy New Year Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/31/2014 2:32:00 PM

Thank you Richard...whatever the result, I'm glad that it passed your test! May you too have a new year filled with happiness, good health, love and in the company of a productive muse! // paul

Leon Enriquez

Date: 12/31/2014 5:55:00 AM

Dear Paul: Thank you for the support my friend. Here's wishing you and your loved ones A Happy New Year filled with peace, joy and love. All my best wishes on the last day of 2014, Leon.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/31/2014 1:01:00 PM

Thank you my friend Leon! All the very best to you and yours! May your pen be kept always busy. Love and peace! // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/31/2014 2:11:00 AM

I liked the one best about the drinking man, and coincidentally it is the picture i chose for my own theme. You did a great senryu for it!!

Paul Callus
Date: 12/31/2014 12:58:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! You have been a good friend and critic:) Your support is greatly appreciated. All the best. // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/31/2014 12:40:00 AM

Much appreciated Paul..work of a master. Love and Regards. Best wishes of 2015 to you all from my family. God bless you and keep you in good health.Your friend RAJAT

Paul Callus
Date: 12/31/2014 12:44:00 PM

Thank you Rajat...for your visits and support. May you and your loved ones have a happy and fruitful new year. Love and peace! // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/30/2014 8:08:00 AM

A necklace of wisdom pearls, admirably crafted, dear Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 12/30/2014 11:43:00 AM

Hi Demi...coming from you, these comments are doubly appreciated! Words of wisdom are usually found in your clever poetry! All the best. // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/30/2014 7:22:00 AM

Hi Paul, how clever...choosing more than one picture and offering such powerful interpretation for each in so few words. Your Senyrus are awesome! Good luck in the contest, and Happy New Year to you! Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 12/30/2014 11:46:00 AM

Many thanks Sandra; I love your comments!. Only on reading the rules a second time did I realize that we are allowed to make use of more than one picture. Thank you for the lovely wishes and may the new year bring you happiness and a loving muse! // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/30/2014 5:26:00 AM

I love your way with words.....Great job. Good luck

Paul Callus
Date: 12/30/2014 9:27:00 AM

Thank you Eileen...I love your way with words, too:) hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2014 3:57:00 AM

- Great !!! - Well done, Paul !!! - Luck in contest - The year 2014 did not have many hours left .... The bells will ring in a new year 2015! - I wish you and your family a peaceful and beautiful New Year! - We will meet again with smiles and tears in the new year - Bless you my friend! - // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/30/2014 10:02:00 AM

Many thanks Anne Lise! Looking forward to another lovely year in your company. May you and all your loved ones have a lovely and fruitful new year. God bless /x/ paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/30/2014 1:57:00 AM

love the strings.. boosting with power, elegance and wisdom!!! 2.4.7 i like best.. :)! Happy New Year.. :D! hugs and lots of smiles!! :D ......olive eloisa

Paul Callus
Date: 12/30/2014 9:43:00 AM

Thank you Olive_eloi!:) I love your cultured comments! May the new year bring you joy and love....hugs and smiles:)))) .... paul

David Mohn

Date: 12/29/2014 11:18:00 PM

Nicely written Paul, 7 is pure gold...good luck in the contest

Paul Callus
Date: 12/30/2014 11:20:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely visit, and high rating, David. May I wish you all the best for 2015. // paul