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e e : The Artist

                                                     still coming
                                                 even coming
                                         always Cumming
                                      in all ways coming

                          “in just”  a rar-ee-motion
                         where innocenc-ee-ndures
                                   the  naïv-ee-toughts
                                 your wis-ee-ndowment

   in time of messaging ... LOL ... you slide sideways
           “your syntax you didn’t your burning mark you did”
                      tobogganing aw-ee-steem I’m a goner
           I               play                           in                           o
                 can’t           with          line           your           n        r
                                           this                             ho


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  1. Date: 7/21/2014 6:25:00 AM
    cont'd I mean-- I just stumbled on it the other day and I wasn't logged on and now I am laze.e. to look for it- but I remember seeing it all got quackee-- and I know, I know that was written for my "K" contest, i could be mistaken, and if I am, call me Duckula. I guess I just got sad that your original amazing poem isn't there anymore & even my comments are nowhere to be found, sniff. That was truly a magnificent write. I do respect though if you don't want it posted here anymore.

  1. Date: 7/21/2014 6:22:00 AM
    Oh wowe.e. Ruben! Oh, g.e.e. you make this look soo! Wow, I can only hope to write something as witte.e. as this. Heaven help me.e. I am going craze.e. on the double e.e.! Ne.e.dless (I swear i can't stop, the ee's ke.e.p <--se.e. on popping.! Me loving this, obviously! I loved how you even shaped it into a sailboat, complete with waves. Where are your writes?? Keep 'em Cumming pls... btw, I saw Don't Come!Did a duck attack it?? Whatt happened? I can't even see my comment there!

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 4:54:00 AM
    Very clever... congratulations... Terry

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 11:03:00 AM
    So creative...I like the way you form your awesome poem friend Ruben. congratulations on your win. Hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 10:49:00 AM
    Always a fun read with you Ruben!

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 8:53:00 AM
    Your poems are all winners........always deserving more than an H.M. unless H. M. stands for Highest Merit!!!!!!!! never ordinary....always worthy! :)

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 10:04:00 PM
    Ruben, I had to see this one after what you said at PD's blog. I am not a huge fan of ee and I guess one would have to be a big fan to truly appreciate this poem. What I love about it especially is the cool ending. That was pretty cool, like roller coaster! I once did a parody on his poem "In Just" but I think I never posted it here. Anyway, I love that "In Just" poem that you made reference to here in your tribute.

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 7:53:00 PM
    You,,ARE,,one creative DUDE, Rube! Can't wait to see what's next!

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 6:50:00 PM
    Ruben Congratulations :-) with your nice and wonderful winning free verse poem~ Always & Forever* PD

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 2:52:00 AM
    I seem to be drawn to poetry that has already won awards ruben lol thank you for your kind comments on my poetry I am new at this and its lovely to know that my words are being enjoyed ... This poem is really clever ... I smiled all the way down the page simply brillant .. Love Jayne x x

  1. Date: 5/24/2009 3:49:00 AM
    Ruben, I smiled out loud when I read this poem. First of all the ee in your chosen words was very clever. Then, the play at the end put the topping on the poem. I love it. Congratulations for placing in: i thank you God for this most amazing (poetry) contest. Sponsored by: Michele Nold-Godleske. Thank you for creating, sharing and encouraging. Lovingly, Dane

  1. Date: 5/22/2009 3:00:00 PM
    Ruben, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 5/22/2009 2:01:00 PM
    Warmest congrats Ruben on your awesome big win! Well done! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/22/2009 6:44:00 AM
    so clever and terrific wit! Congratulations on this winning poem!! Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 5/21/2009 11:54:00 PM
    Congrats on your success in Michele's contest Ruben Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 5/16/2009 7:07:00 AM
    Ruben, here I find myself again... I have to put this into faves. Wonderful my friend!

  1. Date: 5/9/2009 2:08:00 PM
    WOW and bravo! I say! Brilliant, play on words, lines, and move over... I wana toboggan too! ;) That hill looks fun! Hugs my friend, always always love reading you.

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 9:54:00 AM
    Hello Ruben my friend, very nice poetry. Well done. Thank you for your warm comments on my poems. Ernilando

  1. Date: 5/1/2009 10:08:00 AM
    Very enjoyable - both visually and poetically. VERY nicely done

  1. Date: 4/22/2009 11:09:00 AM
    Thank you Ruben, for your kind comment this morning on my poem 'Sneakers and a Backpack' answer...yes, terrible... unfortunately, a true incident happened just last Friday to a wonderful young man we know, a wonderful college instructor, this fine husband to our neighbor's daughter, a father of two children, a kayaking awful. So many hearts are hurting. Thanks again for you kind comment.