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Droplets

Water falling, trickling downward wet mossy stones shine and glimmer droplets dancing tumbling onward Soft tinkles as they head coastward the sounds echo like a crooner water falling, trickling downward A mast standing out, a halyard of the ships bobbing in fervour droplets dancing tumbling onward Streams joining rivers flood backward the noise loud as it gets faster water falling, trickling downward Thunderous waves heading southward ships tossing, sails all a flutter droplets dancing tumbling onward Tidal water becomes wayward waves flowing over the breaker water falling, trickling downward droplets dancing tumbling onward contest: One of Your Best wriiten06/13/2013

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Date: 7/7/2013 10:41:00 AM
Linda :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Nathan's contest!!! awesome winning write. LOVE LOVE * Linda
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Date: 7/7/2013 3:45:00 PM
Hi Linda Ty you have been busy reading my work really appreciate your time and feedback Hope all is now ok with you Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/4/2013 8:38:00 AM
Loved it Shadow ...Seren
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Date: 7/4/2013 6:36:00 PM
Hi Seren so nice of you ty Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/2/2013 6:52:00 AM
Shadow you've set up this scene wonderfully. Nicely done. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/3/2013 5:10:00 PM
Connie ty your encouragement is appreciated Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/1/2013 9:47:00 PM
Shadow, congratulations with your winning poem, in Nathan's one of your best poems. *SKAT*
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Date: 7/3/2013 5:13:00 PM
Hi SKAT so nice of you ty congrats to you Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/1/2013 9:22:00 PM
congrats ' NATE
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Date: 7/3/2013 5:13:00 PM
hi Nathan Ty for my place and for running contest Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/13/2013 8:38:00 AM
The "Tidal water tidal" line threw me off a tad. But, not enough to keep me from adoring the atmosphere in these lines. Very nicely done! :)
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Date: 6/13/2013 9:57:00 AM
Drake hi and ty I removed it stupid me. I altered that sentence a tad and forgot it grrr lol glad you still enjoyed Shadow x
Date: 6/13/2013 4:43:00 AM
Powerful as the waves, deep as the ocean, ongoing as the Amazon! Excellent work!
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Date: 6/13/2013 4:51:00 AM
Hi Demetrio not entirely happy with it lol I seemed to drift off course a bit. So really appreciate your feedback Shadow xox

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