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Drip, Drip

Drip, drip is the sound of my tears When you lived out my fears Drip, drip is the sound of your blood Before your body made that thud

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John Heck

Date: 12/28/2008 1:00:00 PM

An interesting and chilling write. Eerie in concept and composition. A poem that forces the reader to raise an eyebrow, contemplate and read the poem again. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Peace always, John

Deneen White

Date: 12/27/2008 5:47:00 PM

such a sad and painful write, I am not sure if this is recent or not, but in time you will heal, take care D-nyce

Date: 12/27/2008 2:42:00 PM

An eerie poem that has that Edgar Alan Poe feel. Effective title. Scary thought effective portrayed. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing. I hope you have a wonderful New Year. Karen