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Dreamtime: Comes the Tide Premiere Contest Winner

There are those who will not hear the siren's wail, But will know the wheat has turned pale. Winds will sweep up from the south and the west, His chorus of trees swaying bravely are Blessed. Shields aside, faces lit in harmony, Destiny, homogeny, all God's Children once more free. Lightning, earthquakes, tsunami seas, Herald His Coming while evil flees. Shooting Stars, like hail from above, Will cleanse us from sin on Wings of the Dove. And balance in nature will sweep o'er the land With God in His Glory Grasp all in His Hand 12/12/21

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Date: 8/6/2022 7:22:00 AM
Wow! This is a superb write my dear friend James. I love every couplet a lot but my favorite is couplet no. 4. Belated Congratulations on your well-deserved trophy win. Thanks for sharing! I will fave this stunning write of yours if you don't mind. God bless you.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 8/6/2022 9:54:00 AM
Yes Len, couplet 4 is smooth & succinct, I agree with your observation, thanks for honoring my ink with a fave! jamesy
Date: 7/17/2022 9:27:00 AM
The potent beauty of both your title and poem moves the heart and soul, James. Your artistry shines with vibrant faith and imagery. Belated congratulations for your excellent trophy win with this inspiring piece. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/17/2022 8:43:00 PM
Along with you my friend, I keep the faith!
Date: 7/10/2022 3:00:00 PM
“And balance in nature will sweep o'er the land. And balance in nature will sweep o'er the land What a miracle that would be. I love your Dreamtime poems. SuZ
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/10/2022 5:30:00 PM
Thank you SuZ, no one has ever complimented me on my special series, flattered, thx! jimmy
Date: 6/27/2022 4:56:00 PM
"while evil flees" agrees Ps. 37: "For evil men will be done away with" v:10 Just a little while. longer, and the wicked will be no more' You will look at where they where. and they will not be there." Thank you for commenting on my poem, cause I got to read this first place beauty!Congrats!
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 6/27/2022 6:21:00 PM
Grazí Barbara!
Date: 4/26/2022 6:19:00 PM
Oh my such a serene and blessed epigram! Kindly accept belated congratulations Marshall.... Silpika
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Date: 2/19/2022 2:15:00 PM
James, I certainly am looking for the second coming, the Rapture. You have an outstanding way with words. Congratulations on the win. I enjoyed every word. (FAV). Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 2/5/2022 2:17:00 PM
I like this faith-based work. It is coming but I don't know exactly when nor all the details but it is coming. My father looked for it in his lifetime and now my life is coming to an end and I can see the time is drawing nigh but still we don't know when. I enjoyed reading your work. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/5/2022 6:14:00 PM
Thank you my longtime friend!
Date: 2/5/2022 8:30:00 AM
The wheat has turned pale, plus tsunamis ... As Book of Revelation foretells. Then Jesus's second coming: "balance in nature will sweep over the land," sums up the New Earth, New Heaven. I am thankful Jimbo does remember his Brother Anil, & comes timeously PTL
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Date: 2/5/2022 8:39:00 AM
Thank you Brother!
Date: 1/31/2022 6:54:00 AM
Congrats James, shooting stars will cleanse our sins. Beautifully crafted. Thanks for sharing
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 1/31/2022 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Arjun!
Date: 1/22/2022 8:57:00 PM
Yes, the Bible is proved correct. Now we have to discern more than ever that His second coming is nearer ! Hold fast on to His hands ! That's what we should do and can do ! Congrats on your great win James.
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Date: 1/23/2022 12:43:00 AM
Thanks Valsa! and just caught typo too! (lightning) from lightening!...to make lighter!
Date: 1/22/2022 4:57:00 AM
Congrats James, you nailed it
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Date: 1/22/2022 7:20:00 AM
Thanks Richard!
Date: 1/16/2022 9:40:00 AM
Wow Jim~Revelations here we come! This is a master piece. Sorry I didn't see this earlier~Congratulations on your WIN! Blessings, Paulette
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 1/16/2022 10:19:00 PM
Thank you my café friend!
Date: 1/15/2022 9:09:00 AM
The end-times but also can be a present realization, if one accepts the Christ. Excellent write my friend!
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Date: 1/16/2022 10:18:00 PM
Thanks Joe!
Date: 1/10/2022 8:44:00 PM
Endtimes? Well said, and impressive rendering of Revelation of Jesus Christ, by John. Shalom shalom & Happy New Year my Brother James
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Date: 1/11/2022 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Anil!
Date: 1/9/2022 9:58:00 AM
Wonderful poem. Congrats on your win. love phyl
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Date: 1/10/2022 2:37:00 AM
Thanks Phyl!
Date: 1/8/2022 9:22:00 AM
James , just seeing these beautiful words of yours . So poignant and enveloping . I love the passage “ shooting stars like hail from above …. Congratulations on your win . Happy healthy new year to you and yours. Susan :)
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 1/10/2022 2:37:00 AM
Thank you Susan
Date: 1/7/2022 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning poem! It's wonderfully descriptive of the Second Coming of Christ...so beautifully penned!
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Date: 1/7/2022 11:54:00 AM
Thanks Susan!
Date: 1/4/2022 6:24:00 PM
Shooting stars cleanse our sin, nice and well deserved win. Lovely
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Date: 1/4/2022 8:14:00 PM
Thank you Arjun!
Date: 1/2/2022 11:30:00 AM
- A wonderful winning poem James, congratulations so much :) - Best wishes for the new year 2022 ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/2/2022 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise!
Date: 12/28/2021 11:38:00 AM
This is such a beauty, also no surprise that you won! Congratulations James :) hope your Christmas was blessed
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Wilma Neels
Date: 1/2/2022 8:45:00 PM
Happy New Year to you too James :)
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 12/28/2021 4:58:00 PM
Thanks Wilma! nice to see you! Happy New Years!
Date: 12/28/2021 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful/beautiful write. Have a blessed day and New Year 2022....................
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Date: 12/28/2021 7:50:00 AM
Same to you Paula, thanks!
Date: 12/27/2021 6:47:00 AM
Love your style of a pause in the second line of each couplet, James. The message is clearly expressed in flowing poetic form. Bill He's coming again! Be ready!
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 12/27/2021 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Bill!
Date: 12/27/2021 4:52:00 AM
The Lord is omnipotent, All powerfull Everlasting creator of all things.' I hope the rest of the holidays go well Good on ya for the 1st place mate.' Well done Jimbo.)
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 12/27/2021 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Joe!
Date: 12/27/2021 1:07:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this hope-filled muse of yours, very well expressed in your poetic style. God bless you.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 12/27/2021 4:31:00 AM
Thank you Beata!
Date: 12/26/2021 2:56:00 PM
This is very beautiful and uplifting inspiring poetry James. Congratulations on your Trophy win that is so deserving. Hope you enjoy the holidays. Blessings xxoo
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 12/26/2021 11:59:00 PM
Thank you Connie!
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