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DREAMING

Olive Eloisa Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled DREAMING which was written by poet Olive Eloisa Guillermo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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DREAMING

Peek into my heart..
you'll see a sac..
Sac containing you in it..
hidden true not myth..

We are so brave..
Basking in affection we crave..
Time & effort we save..
treating each other not a slave..

I saw your gazing..
Slowly searching, seeking..
Nonchalantly questioning..
Probing realms of innocence..

I held my hand..
Asking you to wand..
Hand clasps we walk..
Dreamily never in shock...

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  1. Date: 10/14/2014 1:30:00 PM
    Dreamy write about two in love, to stay in love, into their tomorrows. Lovely short poem Olive, James :)

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 12:29:00 AM
    "tremendously awesome!!! SKAT"

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 7/5/2013 8:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks much :) your poems are same too..
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 5:22:00 PM
    A very endearing & touching piece. Open, deep, & from the heart. Excellent!

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 7/5/2013 8:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) i can only reply with my smile.. true, its from the heart