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Dragon's Breath

Who dares to enter my realm? Do you not feel the heat of my breath? You like many others will be consumed. Your bones will be added to my pile. Do you not feel the heat of my breath? My power is beyond any you have known! Your bones will be added to my pile. Watch and be amazed at what I can do. My power is beyond any you have known. I have lived for five hundred years. Watch and be amazed at what I can do. Fire from my mouth is hot like the sun. I have lived for five hundred years. You like many others will be consumed. Fire from my mouth is hot like the sun. Who dares to enter my realm?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/23/2013 9:17:00 AM
Such a fierce poem, but I believe dragons are like any other creature, tough on the outside, but soft on the inside. They just want someone to get past the flames to love them!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2013 9:44:00 AM
You are probably right.
Date: 11/23/2013 8:53:00 AM
This immediately made me think of "Smaug" from "The Hobbit" and put a smile on my face. Thanks for sharing, bud! Kudos :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2013 8:58:00 AM
Cool!
Date: 11/22/2013 11:49:00 PM
I DARE ENTER YOUR REALM........I'm a dragon trainer......... ;) And if that doesn't work......the Warrior Princess will figure something out.......She will tame the dragon.....so it spits fire only...occasionally! Sorry, Richard. I had to tease...Take care!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2013 8:23:00 AM
You would be safe, I'm a pussycat disguised as a dragon.
Date: 11/22/2013 5:58:00 PM
your poetry just gets better Rick I love this Shadow x smile hug
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/22/2013 6:03:00 PM
It was supposed to be for the breath fire contest, I should have read the rules before I wrote it *lol* Eithe way I ended up with a poem so I guess that's a win.
Date: 11/22/2013 8:15:00 AM
Dragons, you speak my language. Now I want to see the How to Train your Dragon movie. THANKS! =D
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/22/2013 8:34:00 AM
That was a great movie!
Date: 11/21/2013 10:13:00 PM
Sounds like my ex gf!!! ( kidding ) I enjoyed this write!!! Dragons always make me dream.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/22/2013 7:30:00 AM
Ha ha, she sounds hot!

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