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Down Where the Jasmine Grows

Down where the Jasmine grows wild Gracing the woods with yellow light Wisteria turned loose romps through trees Climbing higher cascading scent on midnight breeze Night is dark for waning moon is covered in mist As crickets' symphony orchestra entertains nights' owl A thousand plants pollinate the cool night air All is peace and harmony here Whitie slumbers in his bed With dreams of dinasaur's bones Running through his head Will this night be his last Or will the radiation come And kill all that can't last Will it be payback for unleasing the "beast" Some sixty odd years ago so we wouldn't go down in defeat?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/22/2011 12:29:00 PM
Your poem has inspired me to want to write something serious beside funny and love poems... You are a fine artist.
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Date: 3/26/2011 10:39:00 AM
i felt as if i was back in the woods camping with my fellow man, and watching all the beauties of the night, my oh my what a beautiful sight. loved it !
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Date: 3/24/2011 3:46:00 PM
Great questioning factual piece Sara, it is good to challenge (accepted wisdom?) who knows what results....enjoyed so much.
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Date: 3/24/2011 2:26:00 PM
Started out totally different from how it ended. Very profound statement, SAra!!
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Date: 3/24/2011 1:14:00 PM
The ending is such a profound statement and a wake-up call to all. Great writing, Sara. Lainie.
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Date: 3/24/2011 11:19:00 AM
Such a beautiful and sad poem, Sara. Hope you're fighting fit again : ) Jack
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Date: 3/24/2011 9:27:00 AM
Really enjoyed the tranquil mood set in the first two verses, Sara, and then felt the pain as you spoke of the radiation from the first atom bomb. Wish we would stop looking for weapons of mass destruction and invest more time trying to solve our domestic dilemmas. Awesome poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/24/2011 9:03:00 AM
So lovely to read this beauty sweet lady
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Date: 3/24/2011 8:28:00 AM
thankxx for the clarification Sara... on your lines.. a great write to ingest with much to think on as one reads.. appreciate your talent and gift ... hope today is a good one for u my friend..luv..
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Date: 3/24/2011 5:53:00 AM
Well the Good Book says we WIN Sara so to answer your last verse.. the beast is running rampant now but not for much longer.. the elegant beautiful lines above your last verse are full of wonderful imagery ..u must have a lovely view where u reside as this is very creative work... poignant and powerful last verse makes us all think and wonder what is coming next luv.. S.M.
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Date: 3/23/2011 9:30:00 AM
Hi Sara! I love the smell of Jasmine...this certainly begins by awakening the senses. Oh, Whitie doesn't sound so young, not when he "dreams of dinosaur's bones", but he might have the will and determination of a survivor! Wishing you the best!! Mikki
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Date: 3/23/2011 8:40:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this wonderful write this morning Sara. I guess peace sometimes comes with a price. Have a lovely day. Hope you are feeling better. love phyl
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Date: 3/23/2011 8:26:00 AM
wow, sara.. a shimmering piece with a sense foreboding! love this work; so finelly receptive of you... to good health and a better world :) huggs, nette
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