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Down by the pier

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Down by the pier

The bunny is dead.
What, didn't you hear?
Got shot in the head.
Got shot by the pier.

Maybe it was love
or just an affair.
Had a couple of
romps with a hot hare. 

The bunny's mad wife
had hired a gun
and ended his life.
It had to be done.

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  1. Date: 3/18/2013 2:45:00 AM
    Welcome to the soup!! :D I really like your poem :D