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A man stands on a corner Another man he sees flee past him bleeding in the night That man wears his face A dying man runs bleeding past a man on the corner In that man’s face he can see his own frightened eyes Dec. 2, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/14/2016 10:04:00 PM
Interesting. I liked the last portion of each stanza
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Date: 12/14/2015 6:54:00 PM
Eerie and cleverly written.
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Date: 12/12/2015 2:44:00 PM
Clever write. love phyl
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Date: 12/11/2015 10:16:00 PM
Wow, this is a captivating read!! Congrats, on your first place win!!
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Date: 12/11/2015 5:05:00 PM
Stopping by with congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/9/2015 1:38:00 AM
Cleverly written Andrea congratulations!
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Date: 12/8/2015 6:02:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb first place win Andrea!
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Date: 12/7/2015 4:15:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 12/7/2015 3:13:00 PM
This is very intelligent, impressive and dramatic - congrats on you deserved 1st place ... CayCay
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:54:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:10:00 PM
Well composed. Congrats to win first place. Hugs. Anisha D
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:00:00 PM
Awesome! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/7/2015 11:04:00 AM
Really, really good! Congrats for first place. I saw a man across the table from me once about 25 years ago, looked just like me, I stared at him, he wasn't impressed!
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Date: 12/7/2015 10:19:00 AM
Nice take, Andrea. Congrats on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/7/2015 9:09:00 AM
Reminds me of an episode of Twilight Zone!! Good one !! Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 12/7/2015 8:07:00 AM
Very clever and effective! Congrats on top spot!
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:32:00 AM
Well written, it is very clever. Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:16:00 AM
VERY very astute one, Andrea. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations for your well deserved win Andrea.
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Date: 12/5/2015 10:40:00 AM
Deep shadows hear. Good stuff. Love, daver
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Date: 12/4/2015 12:03:00 AM
Now, that's very clever, you clever thing from planet clever. Will do well. Viv x
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Date: 12/3/2015 11:49:00 PM
Wow, incredible, took me a sec to get it!Loved this!
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Date: 12/3/2015 4:25:00 PM
Wonderful take on the topic Andrea....wearing other's faces to stay alive. Love it #7 ~~X~~
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Date: 12/3/2015 4:10:00 PM
Lol! A well written piece. Thanks for sharing.........A.M.
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Date: 12/3/2015 1:57:00 PM
Scary one reads like a winner..Mirroring work..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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