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Doing Good

DOING GOOD “Tired am I”, You told me the other day my friend, “for many good deeds have I been doing for so long but recognition for my contribution haven’t I received any, why?” Here is my reply to you, gentle friend of mine Written with the tenderness your kind heart has come So well to know, Tell me: Does the sun care to be appreciated for the affection it Embraces the earth Or For the caresses its rays so abundantly dispense to Each mountaintop? Does the cloud request a reward for the load it carries In its bosom Or For the drops of rain that so kindly bestows onto the Arid ground? Does the earth seek payment from the seed when into Its soil planted Or For the fruits the trees so bigheartedly distribute, rebellious Stomachs to appease? Does the bee demand compensated to be for pollinating The flowers Or For producing its divine honey that even the immortals so Much enjoy? Does the wind ever insist on any fee when through the Leaves whispers Or For when the murmur of brooks and the melody of singing Birds transmitting? Shouldn’t we, my loving friend, inspired by nature’s unselfish Examples be And Share our soul’s wealth, expecting nothing in return, from our Fellow humans? And finally Is there anything we could ever think, nobler and holier to be, than Lord’s will, we to be doing? © Demetrios Trifiatis 11 NOVEMBER 2013

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Date: 11/13/2013 9:03:00 AM
Demetrios....certainly going into my favorites...:-) Can't tell you how many times I've heard almost this exact thing from my parents..."in different words" if ever growing as children we once complained..they said you must gives thanks for ten things...this simply is well..can't find the right words.:-) :-) :-) :-)
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Date: 11/13/2013 9:06:00 AM
That is a great complement my dear, Donna, for me to approach your parents in wisdom! God bless you!
Date: 11/12/2013 9:47:00 AM
Excellent work about the topic of feeling unappreciated..I have heard it said that if one doesn't toot their own horn that it won't get tooted..Sara
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Date: 11/12/2013 10:13:00 AM
Thank you dear, Sara! It is so wonderful for you to visit and comment! Yes, it is true what you say but what counts really in every action of ours for GOD is the intention of the action!
Date: 11/12/2013 9:08:00 AM
I'm doing good, Demetrios, when i read your poetry,,,it is so inspiring how could i not be.....
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Date: 11/12/2013 9:16:00 AM
Harry, my friend, how lovely to be visiting by you and receive such a worthy comment, Thank you! I think you always do good! God bless you! The message for Lucy, was posted at the exact time your was coming!
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Date: 11/12/2013 9:10:00 AM
My dearest friend, Lucy, thank you so much for you warmhearted comment! We all are one of a kind for HIM! God bless you!
Date: 11/12/2013 8:25:00 AM
This is awesome and so true are your words. I do say - you are one of a kind. Thanks for sharing.... Lucy
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Date: 11/12/2013 9:13:00 AM
Lucy, my dear, I was posting my reply above for you when Harry' s message showed up! I am sorry just read above! Thank you!
Date: 11/12/2013 7:44:00 AM
Profound, my dear poet. Absolutely amazing! I must say....you of your absolute bests. Thanks you for your recent visit. Blessings....
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Date: 11/12/2013 9:22:00 AM
Best the one who inspires the heart and guides the mind! Thank you so much for your noble comment!
Date: 11/11/2013 10:33:00 AM
the sun looks the same; it is our perspective that makes things diferent, sometimes negative.. wonderful work filled with reflective strains, D... deep write!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/11/2013 2:54:00 PM
It is so nice for you to visit and to comment! Thank you!
Date: 11/11/2013 8:50:00 AM
The phrasing is very different, it demands that you concentrate on the meaning of the words. There is much wisdom within these lines. Well done Demetrious.
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Date: 11/11/2013 2:55:00 PM
Thank you, Richard, for your gracious comment!
Date: 11/11/2013 6:46:00 AM
- The joy of giving without demanding anything in return .... it is not always appreciated ... or could be misunderstood .... a strange world we live in. .. very skillfully written with your beautiful words and feelings Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/11/2013 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise, for your visit and your kind comment!
Date: 11/11/2013 6:24:00 AM
I believe we all feel this way at one point or another in our lives,that what we have done doesn't seem to amount to anything, or that we haven't gotten any recognition for our kindness, and I agree with everything you said, especially the last two lines! They are noble themselves those lines are! What a glorious poem my friend, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/11/2013 2:54:00 PM
Russell, my friend thank you for your comment!

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