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Do the Bogeyman

The Orion has arrived! On board the Flagship, RearAdmiral Mickael, Eternal Dark Man on the bridge, And his Ladyship PrincessLadyJewel, His bodyguard of a thousand blades! He came to tame and conquer the carrions, Blood sucking humanoids of the terra vista race, They even fed on themselves and their friends, Neither conscious nor intelligent to communicate or trade, How do you win against the soulless one? They do possess a weakness in their spiked defense, Look for their durian head leader and dance, For god sake not the Saturday night fever! Nor the moonwalk or criss cross jump-jump!! They are cousins of zombies do the bogeyman, And than you'll see all of them fall down, Quickly now before they wake eat the leader's brain. What happens next?. . . To be continued. . .Ha ha ha ha ha ha Ga za and wait. . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/29/2013 9:52:00 AM
The first two stanzas seem to belong together; I felt like I was aboard the Starship Enterprise for a moment, then we seemed to switch gears and I felt like I was in the middle of an Insane Clown Posse song. But, in any event, I enjoyed the sci-fi feel, and I appreciate the urban feel you bring to your poems, even if it seems a bit disjointed in this piece. You are a very talented individual, no doubt about that, though :)
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Date: 8/13/2013 3:04:00 PM
I liked the joke about Saturday Night Fever in here. heehee!!!
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/14/2013 1:15:00 AM
Andrea thank you so much, you are right and still a few more
Date: 8/13/2013 10:06:00 AM
tripping fantastic, danesh... is there a sequel or prequel to this, anakin?.. grrreat write!..:)
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/14/2013 1:13:00 AM
Thank you so much. . . Nette there's sure is Episode II at a theater near you. . . .

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