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dandelion seeds - dreams gone with the wind --------------------------- Contest: One Line Poem Sponsor: Silent One Placed 2nd

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/22/2016 7:43:00 AM

Your short line speaks volumes!!! Congrats Paul, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/22/2016 10:34:00 AM

I am glad that you like it, Teddy:) Thank you...regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2016 7:43:00 AM

One liners so unique are the ones upon the winners’ page..Glad to see you there..Congrats..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 7/20/2016 5:01:00 PM

Thank you Sara; I have just read your winning entry....very wise reasoning! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2016 2:57:00 PM

Just now seeing your reply to me on my last comment here. I have a dandelion etheree with a theme just like this one. that's why I love this one so much. Congrats on the win

Paul Callus
Date: 7/19/2016 3:21:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Your "Best Monoku" was amongst the best!! pity it was not granted its due merit! Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/18/2016 2:56:00 PM

Hi Paul, Congrats on your 2nd place win it was well deserved: -) Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 7/19/2016 1:39:00 PM

Many thanks, Alexis:) I truly enjoyed your winning entry, too! Regards // paul

Jesse Day

Date: 7/18/2016 12:07:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the One-Liner Contest! Jesse

Paul Callus
Date: 7/18/2016 2:26:00 PM

Pleased to have you stopping by, Jesse; thank you. Regards // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/17/2016 9:14:00 PM

Great job Paul, congratulations

Paul Callus
Date: 7/18/2016 2:25:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie! You did very well, yourself!! // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/17/2016 6:53:00 PM

Great metaphor, Paul! Congrats on your placement in the one-liner contest! 7 Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 7/18/2016 2:23:00 PM

Thank you Sandra; both the comments and high rating are appreciated. Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 7/17/2016 6:00:00 PM

would have loved to see this at number 1 Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 7/18/2016 2:22:00 PM

You're very kind, Jan:) Thank you! I have visited your winning entry, and I can assure you that you merited a much higher placing; not easy to judge so many entries in a short time! hugs // paul

Lu Loo

Date: 7/17/2016 5:44:00 PM

Paul, this is great!congrats on your placement in the one liner contest :)-luloo

Paul Callus
Date: 7/18/2016 1:52:00 PM

Thank you Laura; your 'harmony' entry has served you well, too:) Regards // paul

Skat A

Date: 7/17/2016 4:55:00 PM

Paul, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**

Paul Callus
Date: 7/18/2016 1:01:00 PM

Thank you, Skat. Hope you're having a lovely Monday, too! ~ Regards // paul

Michael Whatley

Date: 1/29/2016 7:20:00 AM

Incomprehensibly inspiring visions sparked from this one-liner! Great Monoku, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/29/2016 12:59:00 PM

I am pleased that you liked it, Michael; thank you for the lovely comments. ~ Regards // paul

White Sage

Date: 1/28/2016 4:58:00 AM

well penned monoku there Paul, best of luck in the contest

Paul Callus
Date: 1/28/2016 8:44:00 AM

Thank you for reading and liking, WS! ~ All the best. // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/27/2016 10:27:00 AM

Very effective line. May the wind carry a world of dreams to your garden and may they be transformed into many beautiful flowers.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/27/2016 11:25:00 AM

Many thanks Richard. Love your feedback:) ~ All the best. // paul

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/27/2016 8:39:00 AM

Nice work Paul, this poem is innovative, captivating and three dimensional in character. Emile.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/27/2016 11:24:00 AM

Thank you Emile. I see that you noted that 'gone with the wind' has a double significance. ~ Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/27/2016 1:03:00 AM

I love this entry Paul! #7

Paul Callus
Date: 1/27/2016 11:10:00 AM

Thank you Connie! I appreciate both visit and the high rating. ~ Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2016 4:01:00 PM

Wonderful, Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/27/2016 9:59:00 AM

Thank you Andrea:) Could be that one of my dandelion seeds has passed your way! ~ paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/26/2016 12:47:00 PM

ohh my, so visual with great twist in the end, paul !... huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 1/27/2016 9:33:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely and encouraging comments, Nette:) ~ Hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2016 7:53:00 AM

Good idea to use the dandelion in this context..I found some humor in this even though I am sure that was not meant..I think that it is because there is no telling where the seeds of a dream will land and what they will produce..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 1/27/2016 9:32:00 AM

Thank you for the feedback, Sara. I agree with your musing:) ~ Regards // paul