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Dinny, din, din

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Song about the noise in ones head

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Dinny, din, din

Dinny Din Din.

Look in to the devil with sweetness
 Or find me some guy without sin
In cool blooded passion
So bold in your fashion
Look through the hole in your dinny, din, din.

It takes but a scratch to the surface
To peer at the shape we’re all in
Just under that layer you’ll find there a slayer
Who fills your whole head with that dinny, din, din.

It’s a fix, it’s a fix we’re all in
Those fashions and such going by
You know we’re told all those whys
As we hear frightened cries
As we’re caught in the noise of our dinny, din, din.

We’re caught in life’s dreams sweet and sour
As everything’s moving within
With the force of our fright
Our bonds are made tight
As we’re locked in the cage of our dinny din, din
Dinny, din, din.

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  1. Date: 11/29/2013 6:11:00 PM
    Hahahaha. Dem voices be takin' over yer head? I had me a very good laugh now at your dinny-din-dins. I think you will enjoy my "Hostile head takeover". Kinda longish, so I submitted it in two parts. Very entertaining write which I enjoyed reading, my talented friend. Licia :-)

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 11/30/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Lysia. I wrote that poem in the some years ago when I was caught in the throes of PTSD. I no longer take notice of these voices. I will seek out your poem and read. I appreciate your comments my friend....peter
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 10:58:00 PM
    Peter This write is full of creativity and imagination. Gives the reader a chuckle and laugh Nice write Hugs Thanks for the great comment on my rumors poem.

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 11/22/2013 3:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Robin for perusing my pages. I truly do appreciate you taking the time to do this....peter
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 9:09:00 AM
    Hi Peter, stopping by and smiling at the title of your poem... ha... it's been a long time since I've seen them words. a great poem, and i like the image you in the first line. adding you to my favorite poet list. SKAT

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 6/20/2013 12:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Skat, I am glad I made you smile, the whole World needs to smile more .I had never heard of Dinny, din, din, and I actually thought that it was my own. I just thought about the din that used to be in my head, and added the din, din. Perhaps I heard it somewhere. I really appreciate you putting me on your fav poet list, I am sure my humble writings don't deserve it.
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 2:58:00 AM
    yeah as i was reading, something goes like a piano sound dinny din din. very catchy. :D

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 6/20/2013 12:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sounds like you are a bit musical yourself Nato, and thank you
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 12:47:00 AM
    is this somehow a song? like

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 6/11/2013 2:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes Nato, it is a song about all the noise in our heads, thanks for your comment
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 9:32:00 PM
    This has a nice rhythm and I love the dinn y din din part, nice sharing xxx

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 6/10/2013 11:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much, Rose, your comments are appreciated