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Diet No No's

No more cookies, no more chips, No more fattening yummy dips. No more ice cream, no more cake, No more doughnuts on a break. No more milkshakes, no more fries, No more bread and no more pies. No more sugar and no more fat, All these things have made me fat. No more candy that's for sure! I wonder how long I'll endure? From these temptations I must flee, If I want to have less of me. 8/29/13

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Date: 9/12/2013 3:57:00 AM
Melodious and rhythmic
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Date: 9/10/2013 10:02:00 AM
I should have a copy of this on my fridge! Hee,hee. Great one! :o) May you have the strength to succeed.
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Date: 9/1/2013 5:19:00 PM
Oh this poem hits it right on the head. I have to lose weight because I have what is called fatty liver. I cannot have a lot of these things and I love my sweets especially chocolate. This poem reminds me what I have to eat. veggies and fruits---oh the pain of it all. LOL love phyl
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Date: 8/31/2013 11:33:00 AM
a delightful poem Kim I really enjoyed it and the laughter a big bonus Shadow x smile (7)
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Date: 8/31/2013 11:12:00 AM
Bravo! There must be someone who endures / a restrictive diet such as your / But certainly not one such as me / For I eat nothing sugar free. I love this poem of yours.
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Date: 8/30/2013 4:56:00 PM
Hi Kim I enjoyed perusing your poem. Its entertaining, witty and above all great to read. I love it!
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Date: 8/30/2013 2:42:00 PM
i should copy this and carry it around. but i have been practicing.
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Date: 8/30/2013 12:21:00 PM
Hi Kim, I loved this poem. The flow and the rhyming is incredible!! Thanks for sharing it. Karla~
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Date: 8/30/2013 10:28:00 AM
GOOD ONE. I don't even try any more. Counting calories is the best I can manage!!!
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Date: 8/29/2013 11:46:00 PM
Interesting humourous piece
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Date: 8/29/2013 10:30:00 PM
Hi, A creative write that's food for thought! Ken
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Date: 8/29/2013 6:49:00 PM
Enjoyed the rhythm of this one..Desserts are behind me..A minute on the lips a lifetime on the hips..Thanks for stopping by..Your comment was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 8/29/2013 3:54:00 PM
Very clever. I enjoyed reading this and thanks for the darn reminders ! :)
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Date: 8/29/2013 11:04:00 AM
- Oh ..Kim..... I love your funny poems .... eat and be happy .... just a little every day ... not large volumes.... oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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