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Diamonds In Your Eyes

In your eyes, a diamond's remnants Reflects the beauty of inner contentment For only when polished, does its beauty show Like the bright light, of your heart's glow ©Donna Jones 1-2-2014

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Date: 8/18/2014 10:35:00 AM
Donna Dearest friend...... I have seen many great posts that make be regret not spending more time reading your creative work.... this is just one of them..... Love Ya Jake
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Date: 5/26/2014 9:17:00 AM
Dear Donna, this poem is really gorgeous. I was thoroughly engaged from start to finish. I want to take this opportunity to thank you for all the wonderful comments you have placed on my poems in the past. I would be taking them off so I just thought I would acknowledge your kindness before I do.
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Date: 2/23/2014 9:06:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Happy Sunday!
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Date: 2/7/2014 6:52:00 AM
Very beautiful. Sweetness as your heart glows through your words, here and in yesterday. Very peaceful!
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Date: 1/19/2014 4:59:00 PM
this is a unique and thought-provoking poem. Nice work!
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Date: 1/16/2014 12:07:00 PM
many congrats donna xx
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:08:00 AM
This diamond sparkles, congratulations Donna.
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Date: 1/14/2014 11:08:00 PM
Short and oh, so sweet. Congrats. BG
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Date: 1/14/2014 9:47:00 PM
Enjoyed the diamond's remnants and congratulations on the fine win, Donna
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Date: 1/14/2014 3:02:00 PM
- Congratulations Donna, on your beautiful poem in the contest: - "A Diamond's Remnants" Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/11/2014 8:28:00 AM
A wonderful reflection of your inner beauty Donna! It looks like a winner to me. Good luck!
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Date: 1/9/2014 9:35:00 AM
Beauty is found inside; inside ourselves and inside your words.
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Date: 1/8/2014 6:08:00 PM
Love sure can warm our hearts and make our eyes shine a little brighter! You captured that so beautifully here. Very nicely done, Donna! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the kind congrats on my poem!
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Date: 1/8/2014 2:39:00 PM
A perfect and I mean perfect poem Donna, It could not be improved on if you tried....Hugs....Roger
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Date: 1/8/2014 12:17:00 AM
can't believe I never saw this one yet. I really like it, Donna. Short but very sweet!!
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Date: 1/7/2014 8:51:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this gem Donna...best wishes
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Date: 1/4/2014 5:10:00 AM
So original and lovely!
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Date: 1/3/2014 9:59:00 PM
Beautiful. well written and great flow. Well done. Love the metaphor, take care Pete.
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Date: 1/3/2014 7:35:00 PM
I like the idea of a hearts light being refracted from diamond eyes.
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Date: 1/3/2014 5:27:00 PM
This short, but good. I like the title. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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Date: 1/2/2014 10:11:00 PM
You have written a warmhearted write here my friend! This is a fabulous poem, the eyes are one of the most beautiful parts of the face, which is coupled with the smile! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this positively glorious piece this evening Donna! What a creative poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/9/2014 5:12:00 PM
Well you have beautiful ..both eyes and smile Russell.....thanks for the wonderful compliment....
Date: 1/2/2014 9:37:00 PM
Your lovely words are as the polished gems you have written about great job i really enjoyed this poem my friend, bravo on this special write i read tonight. cheri
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Date: 1/9/2014 5:05:00 PM
Lovely compliment....thank you so much....
Date: 1/2/2014 6:54:00 PM
Charming Donna, I especially liked the half rhyme of remnants/contentment! Very sophisticated! Light & Love
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Date: 1/9/2014 5:02:00 PM
Thank you Debbie. I wondered if it rhymed enough to call it a couplet....for Gail's contest..
Date: 1/2/2014 6:43:00 PM
Oh wow......this is beautiful, and shows your warm heart!
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Date: 1/9/2014 5:00:00 PM
Thanks Carrie......that's a compliment coming from a warm heart..:-)
Date: 1/2/2014 5:49:00 PM
lovely poem, donna!
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Date: 1/9/2014 4:59:00 PM
Thank you Ilene....hope your friend is doing OK and home from the hospital by now....:-) :-)
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