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Diamond Birthed Day

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Diamond Birthed Day

Diamond dawn softened cold clinical walls, smoothing harsh lines, soothing the sleepless with the lullaby of love. Blossom-pastel hues sparkled with crystals of dew; glimmering prisms of diamond-cut light, in the month of showers and flowering bowers. Red and yellow daisies studded dark soil like gemstones tumbled beneath the flower of the sun. Sweet peas twined a bright trellis of light; clinging like a baby's fist, curling around sunbeams, climbing a golden ladder of sunlight. Crystalline morning softly stroked your face: a sleeping jewel, gently polished by the early light of a late April sunrise.
dedicated to my little 'sweet pea' Jake, born 28th April 2009 Charlotte Puddifoot Motif: Nature

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  1. Date: 3/8/2014 10:10:00 AM
    Oh what beautiful metaphors. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 3/7/2014 11:54:00 PM
    Really cool, winning poem!

  1. Date: 3/7/2014 1:48:00 AM
    Congratulations on the big win... I suddenly feel weak,... how are you dear!!

  1. Date: 3/6/2014 8:04:00 PM
    congrats again, dear, and also on Jake~

  1. Date: 3/6/2014 5:25:00 AM
    Very nice poem and win.. Congrats!

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 10:30:00 PM
    Very nice Charlotte... I enjoyed the visit and congratulations on the win... Verlena

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 1:08:00 PM
    A sweet and beautiful poem Charlotte. Enjoyed it very much. Congratulations on your well deserved win - Connie

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 12:41:00 PM
    A nice write! Congrats on the win!!!

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 9:31:00 AM
    A beautiful dedication , A beautiful poem . Written by a beautiful lady , Thank you for sharing.

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 8:52:00 AM
    Nice image ...Best wishes from India dear...

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 7:14:00 AM
    That's wow ! Congrats Charlotte on top place !!

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 6:48:00 AM
    - Charlotte, congratulations on your fine winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 6:30:00 AM
    This is beautiful and soothing. Wonderful images. Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 6:09:00 AM
    Congrats on the worthy win Charlotte.

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 5:41:00 AM
    Exquisite motherly love. Congrats on your win. Ron

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 5:11:00 AM
    It is obvious from this beautiful and elegant tribute to 'Sweet Pea' that you love him very much and that you are a wonderful mother to him as well...Congrats my friend - Tim

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 5:03:00 AM
    Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, Charlotte

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 4:13:00 PM
    oh yeah your little jake. my namia was just in town for a visit with her i pad. we played she tried putting her toes in my nose while i slept. i had my share of the joy.i liked the analogy diamonds . we have to shape them you know.

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 5:45:00 PM
    truly inspiring....lullaby of love........great work

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 1:18:00 AM
    CHARLOTTE, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win * hugs ;-)~p.d

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