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Devotions Emotions

Devotions emotions Commitment is the key that opens the door to a woman's heart. Your devotion will cause a commotion, and love's emotions will start. Your loyal love will stamp it's seal on her heart it will be revealed. Leaving a long lasting impression of your love's confession. When she sees your dedication to your love with sincere feelings, her heart will melt from the flame and her love will leave you reeling Her heart will ache with desire, as your commitment stokes the fire, So put devotions key in the ignition and turn on her emotional exhibition. John Derek Hamilton August 09,2016

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John Hamilton

Date: 8/18/2016 4:15:00 PM

Thanks Laura it was your poem that inspired this so thank you, your pen flows golden! I'm happy my words resonate with you!

Lu Loo

Date: 8/18/2016 3:34:00 PM

Oh John! This is remarkably beautiful! Thank you for mentioning my name, I am grateful and you are the sweetest :) You have a true gift dear man, I am very joyful when reading your words....God bless :)-luloo

John Hamilton
Date: 8/18/2016 9:02:00 PM

Thanks Laura it was your poem that inspired this so thank you. I'm glad my words resonate with you!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/12/2016 1:35:00 AM

I like this one, John:) Very beautiful:)

John Hamilton
Date: 8/12/2016 9:03:00 AM

Thanks Jo, was inspired by Laura's poem, felt good as it flowed!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/11/2016 5:53:00 AM

Insightful poem dear, John! Good for the young to learn! Loved it!

John Hamilton
Date: 8/11/2016 9:11:00 AM

True, but I know a lot of middle age men that won't commit to marriage, but that's what most women want. Thanks for the visit and comment, always a pleasure.