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Devilish Demons of Evil

Past demons can find a way Of darkening a sunny day Leading you through a bad door You once closed and locked before Never walking past the threshold That once turned you bitter cold From things on the other side That you've been trying to hide From new family and good friends Hoping it would be the end Of this evil that can take The strongest man and make him break Enticing you with drugs and drink Gambling and other things Turning your world into horror These demons have all the power Taking over every aspect Of a life you tried to fix Never leaving you to rest Every day they try and test All your will power and strength You just want to beat and win These vices that are dark and evil Haunting you until you feel Your urges can't be controlled But be strong and do not fold You can make it and defeat This devil always at your feet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/30/2013 6:48:00 AM
Wow well I related to and identified with this piece, Sweet Pea! Much truth, throughout! <3
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:31:00 PM
Hello Robin, wow.... this is a strong poem. I know of this Devilish Demons Of Evil.. I've fallen to a few of them traps above... Gambling was a very sad fall in my life a year ago... glad I broke from it, before it broke me.. :-) I'm putting a new carpet at my feet... with light... enjoyed...LINDA
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:33:00 AM
A very emotive piece. Us men always try to battle our demons alone. I have found allowing Jesus to fight for me has made this battle far easier.
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Date: 10/29/2013 12:03:00 AM
Evil forces don't always have to have tangible substance. Good descriptive write here.
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