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Demonic Noise

tsunami commands mother earth to tremble -- demons unburied blue skies of water pour out devastation -- crashing tears thunder thunderous booms of explosions in aftermath -- resilience conquers By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, March 9, 2012 for Nature the Destroyer contest (PD) first place

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2012 1:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Nature The Destroyer" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

Marty Owens

Date: 3/23/2012 10:14:00 AM

Rhonda, Congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/23/2012 9:00:00 AM

congrats on your win from my wife. Ron.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2012 8:20:00 PM

congrats Rhonda on a dynamic first place win luv.. cool photo..too..

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/16/2012 5:48:00 PM

congrats on your deserved 1st place win with this stunning haiku, great use of language and imagery (I love imagery in haiku!) :-)

Sabina Nicole

Date: 3/16/2012 5:31:00 PM

wow...I love what you painted in words!!!well done<3 sabina

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/16/2012 5:07:00 PM

Wow! I can see why you won 1st place with this write. The imagery is fantastic. Congrats on your 1st place win, Rhonda. This is going in my favs. Love, Kim

Gautami Phookan

Date: 3/16/2012 9:03:00 AM

Images of nature's power and destruction so vivid in these lines of haiku.. and liked how resilience conquers despite all. Many congratulations Rhonda on your well deserved 1st place win. love...

Talena Alienmermaid

Date: 3/16/2012 8:26:00 AM

Congrats!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/16/2012 6:13:00 AM

Lovely short writes. Congrad's Light & Love

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 3/16/2012 12:28:00 AM

Congratulations, Rhonda, on your 1st prize. Great poem! Love, Maureen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2012 10:24:00 PM

RHONDA~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/9/2012 6:58:00 PM

Love this!!!!! Always, Laura

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2012 3:14:00 PM

Rhonda, you did as everyone says... outstanding.. or should i say.. all 3 are outrageous... makes me want to hit a tide... I only live 20 minutes from any beach..., stopping by to peep on my entries... thank you.. love it.. always, PD ..

Kevin Clark

Date: 3/9/2012 2:30:00 PM

This is a very good entrance for this contest. It flows nicely. Just like the water it talks about.

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 3/9/2012 5:48:00 AM

nice pic and a gr8 write....~sashi

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 3/9/2012 4:09:00 AM

Ahh! Nice shot...lookin' down the barrel of a glassy gun! Ex Surfer here, so I got MADD love for this Hi-Chooooo! Bless you. Gaz00n tighht!