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Delicious Light and Shade

Finished fragrance falling off the autumn trees Shorter days and darker sun in harvest sprees Green leaves are red brown and yellow Children get in yellow buses to their school Our shirts are long sleeved and time cool The September sun is romantically mellow A box of pumpkin pie underneath your pillow Laughing children in the swimming pool Seeds fall off the trees Greetings for new guests in spring Light and shade chat in your face Season to let go To feel life too is like leaves Days in outspread wings in blue _____________________________________________________ 24/9/2016 For Three Style II Poetry Contest Syllables checked with howmanysyllables.com Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 10/23/2016 2:58:00 AM
Dear PROBIR , congratulations on your great win! ! amazing autumn ! NICE!//love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/22/2016 10:08:00 PM
Very good, Probir, congratulations on your win :) Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/23/2016 1:48:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 10/22/2016 2:22:00 PM
What a lovely poem title...loved the read! Beautiful imagery...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/23/2016 1:49:00 AM
Thank you .
Date: 10/22/2016 11:07:00 AM
lovely imagery about Autumn Probir "light and shade chat in your fave, season to let go" lovely line in your sedoka...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :) -luloo
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/22/2016 12:34:00 PM
Thank you ... I have almost forgotten ... Thank you so much for liking my poem ...
Date: 9/24/2016 9:06:00 AM
Really nice Probir! My favorite line, "A box of pumpkin pie underneath your pillow" I also like the alliteration in the opening line. Nice touch. Good luck in contest:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/24/2016 12:40:00 PM
Thank you Daniel for enjoying and encouraging ....
Date: 9/24/2016 7:30:00 AM
Poetry in a festive mood my friend, Probir! !Excellent composition of images and expressions.A seven!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/24/2016 12:41:00 PM
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Date: 9/24/2016 7:07:00 AM
- A great poem in beautiful lights of the fall, Probir - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a nice weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/24/2016 12:42:00 PM
Thank you ...

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