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Deep Breath

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Deep Breath

I'm not mad, I'm not angry
I can't help you're a little crazy
I breathe in, I breathe out
If I don't,  I'd surely shout

Troubles in the past have come to light
I'll stand my ground, but I won't fight
I'll do what's best, what I see fit
You do what you want, I won't quit

Visions have cleared a path for me
So live your life and leave me be
I'm not angry, I'm no longer mad
Believe me baby, you look sad

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  1. Date: 7/28/2014 10:14:00 AM
    Excellent write as always Tim. We all need to vent at times. that's one reason we write, well I do anyway.Keep breathing my friend. It's essential. Pete.

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 5:57:00 AM
    Cool honey, it flows so nice, keep breathing and remember why exes are exes for a reason, don't let her get to ya. hugs sweets.

    Smith Avatar Tim Smith
    Date: 7/28/2014 7:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh I hear you...just had to vent.....hugs sweetie :)
  1. Date: 7/28/2014 12:49:00 AM
    Excellent poem Tim rhymed and flowed beautifully....peter

    Smith Avatar Tim Smith
    Date: 7/28/2014 1:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my friend....cheers
  1. Date: 7/27/2014 10:52:00 PM
    Great poem, great attitude! Cheers

    Smith Avatar Tim Smith
    Date: 7/27/2014 10:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my friend...just an emotional release...need them from time to time...usually I'll go get my nails done but already did that...lol
  1. Date: 7/27/2014 7:29:00 PM
    Tim I loved this one!! You're probably one of the best poets here..''You do what you want, I won't quit'' ''Visions have cleared a path for me'' These line are just awesome! Very well done man!

    Smith Avatar Tim Smith
    Date: 7/27/2014 8:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Saba...you really know how to boost my confidence....cheers