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Deep and Meaningful Death

Ah! my small withered life Creaking like autumn leaves Try yourself, tread and hear My lost love and her cries. Silence of death had took Glim of my soul and love Darkness ne'er lift from me Until her light lit mine. Date of Entry : 15/03/2020 Contest : Alexandrine - Modified Poetry Contest Sponsor : Dear Heart

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Date: 3/28/2020 10:33:00 PM
I loved this poem especially the first two lines. Congratulations on a well-deserved win... I hope all is well with you and your family... Shirley
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/29/2020 12:01:00 AM
Thank you Shirley.. We are ok here in lockdown.. Hope you are ok.. My prayers always with you.. Keep Safe..
Date: 3/28/2020 5:14:00 PM
I remember this one well as I revist the winners. Big congrats to you on the winner list.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/28/2020 10:29:00 PM
This is really a nice compliment Andrea.. Thanks..
Date: 3/27/2020 10:09:00 AM
Jenish, congratulations on your win in my contest with this deep and sad poem, well done _Constance
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/27/2020 11:50:00 AM
Thank you Constance for that wonderful contest.. Also thank you for placing my poem.. Be safe..
Date: 3/25/2020 10:56:00 PM
Jenish, great poem and a big congratulations on your win in Dear Heart’s Alexamdrine contest-. Hugs Eve
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/27/2020 1:10:00 AM
Thank you Eve for that delightful words..
Date: 3/17/2020 10:40:00 AM
Nice to see love's light amidst the darkness.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/17/2020 11:38:00 AM
Thanks for that wonderful comment..
Date: 3/15/2020 7:25:00 PM
Life's passing -- like the withered leaves. Resonant. Nice reflective write, my friend. :) gw
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/15/2020 10:27:00 PM
Thank you Gershon for the support..
Date: 3/15/2020 3:17:00 PM
Indeed deep and meaningful, Jenish. Loved the picture you put with it too.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/15/2020 10:26:00 PM
Thanks Andrea for your kind support..
Date: 3/15/2020 7:21:00 AM
Love has that power even in death--well said Jenish: --Darkness ne'er lift from me Until her light lit mine..
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/15/2020 7:58:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for those kind words..
Date: 3/15/2020 6:24:00 AM
Impressive writing filled with beauty dearest, Jenish. Hugs xx
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/15/2020 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios.. You are too kind..

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