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December Farewell

What made me look down then, I'll never know as with my shopping bags I crossed the street, movement caught my attention down below- a bumble bee was moving by my feet, slowly and painfully it did progress where to, who knows, since round me I could see only autumnal browns the leaves now less, no blossoms, pollen, nectar for this bee. A breath of pity rose within my heart, I could not turn a blind eye and walk past, so with a bus ticket and credit card I scooped it up and took it to some grass. If these hours were its last, the work now done to pollinate new life we're grateful for, the least that I could do, its race now run was save it being trampled on the floor. Next day I looked where I had seen it last, it lay inches away upon some dirt where it had took its last steps from the grass and given up the ghost, to lie inert. We two made a sad vignette beneath the gloom, but Spring will come, more bees will fill the skies, their gentle buzzing teasing from the blooms and lazy, gentle flight delights our eyes

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Date: 1/14/2019 9:44:00 PM
Such a touching write, Viv! I have also observed bees on their last legs, so to speak, and felt pity for them. Your poetic story really drew me in...great poem to read! :)
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Date: 1/13/2019 3:38:00 PM
This is tenderly touching, so much so that I got emotionally drawn in despite my dislike (FEAR, really) of bees because I'm so allergic. Anyone of depth will find much that is profound in and between each written line. We've been separated far too long, Viv - I realized this and clicked right over. So hard to keep up, impossible for me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 1/13/2019 2:22:00 AM
Excellent tribute to natures ability to reawaken the cycle it has renewal it has used for millennia. Also highlights fact that some of us understand and look to the new cycle with hop in their heart. Hope your New Year has started well Viv. Not long to wait for our first grandchild now. Very best regards David in NZ
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Date: 1/10/2019 5:39:00 PM
hmmm, maybe it was not the same bee, but if it was, wow, it sure wanted to be die a concrete death!! I love the thoughful way you ended this. What a sweet guy you are to care about a bumble bee. I used to drown them in my little swimming pool. I just hated them! (now I have grown up and they don't frighten me) Sure enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 1/3/2019 4:43:00 PM
such a touching scenario Mr Viv hope other people would treat this precious insect with as much care as shown in your poem, I see fewer and fewer in the gardens, without them we are in dire trouble. Happy new Year to you and the family hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/3/2019 2:54:00 AM
Love it Viv, have often done that, being a honey lover. Happy new year. Tom
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