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Death Woven

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Death Woven

Her eyes shone fire frozen.
He touch, moist petals, rosen.
Her breath, warm poison... chosen.
Sweet hearts, death woven.

For John Freeman's Love or Humor Dodoitsu contest (end rhyme accepted).

*Note: "fire" in the first line is a two syllable reading here.

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  1. Date: 1/17/2011 7:47:00 PM
    Congratulations on winning big in this contest. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 4:27:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 1:52:00 PM
    Scott, well done on your win, this is beautiful:))

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 10:52:00 AM
    Hello Scott, This is such a wonderful Poem. So well done and very deep thought given here. Congratulations on your win! As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 10:50:00 AM
    congrats on your win with this great dodoitsu

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 8:36:00 AM
    Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Scott, sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 8:43:00 PM
    Congratulations Scott. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 7:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on you fantastic win in John's contest, Scott! Great job! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 5:45:00 PM
    Congrats Scott on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu.. enjoy your top ten success with luv..

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 3:13:00 PM
    Awesome, Scott. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 3:12:00 PM
    You have a uniqueness of style all your own Scott. Congratulations on this worthy work and your worthy 3ard place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 3:06:00 PM
    Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Scott

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 2:46:00 PM
    This one was chosen. It could have been written by Beethoven. Congratulations on your win in the contest. I couldn't think of a rhyme after "Beethoven".

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 1:59:00 PM
    Scott thanks for your support of my contests, it doesn't go unnoticed. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 6:04:00 PM
    Quite unique and unusual approach, Scott