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Death and I Lost You

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Death and I Lost You

i lost you along the road
towards finding 

yes     i regret it     my friend.

i lost you 
along the race
towards a belief in
nothing more than a
selfish greed     an envy
of myself that’s borderline

i miss you     now.

looking into the sky     you’re gone
and i feel lost     i feel as
if i need one more moment
to tell you how much

i love you.

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  1. Date: 6/3/2010 10:54:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Joseph. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 2:54:00 PM
    Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 1:57:00 PM
    Congrats on being featured. Deep piece. I like this. And I believe you did have that moment when you wrote this. Tony

  1. Date: 5/3/2010 4:34:00 PM
    Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup .. an excellent choice to feature and share with us all.. with luv..from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 5/3/2010 9:35:00 AM
    Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 5/3/2010 4:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Joseph. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 3/5/2010 5:34:00 PM
    ive felt that before...touching

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 5:54:00 PM
    very interesting reality write, Joseph. I can appreciate this. -Robert

  1. Date: 12/30/2009 10:48:00 AM
    Hi, Joseph. I love your really catches at the old gut. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/30/2009 9:55:00 AM
    I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Joseph. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol