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A mystery for us mere human being to unravel; B elief and logic fight over our world, all in confusion. C ome stealthily, it does, while as busy beavers we wander. D riven to sudden halt; surprise, shock and suffering grip tight. E ssentials prop up from some dormant sector of the mind to F ace strain and stress, in some old robotic approach once instilled. G ot to hold upon, got to stand, got to function, as needed. H earing and understanding are postponed until opportune. I rony of life or mockery of fate; its own will to J eer at our needs, feelings, state of being and expectation. K indness, generosity and support shower from around L ike lightness filtering in very long dark and gloomy night. M esmerised we are of a display of crowding humane touch N ever anticipated and evaluated in our O rganisation selfish, to conquer,to build and to rise. P artly wrecked, partly saved, we wade hard to breathe and to sustain. Q uestions are many and answers less; in our everyday, they R ecur, growing in number and torturing us with chagrin. S omebody, luckily has to be here to listen, to share, T o give some answers; family or friends, for us to pick up. U nderstanding and accepting, all we are left with, to fill V oid that keeps growing larger and larger while self confidence W avers often; diversion from normal path of ours, repeats. X enacious we are with willpower strong to rebuild upon. Y ears of engineering; alas, some habits have to be dropped. Z eal to live God's given life has to be gathered to move on! 25/06/2017 15 syllables per line.

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Date: 8/2/2017 1:43:00 PM
Truly amazingly creative and a pleasure to read such poetic craftsmanship my friend! Love the 15 syllable aspect of it as well... A fav..
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/3/2017 8:46:00 AM
I'm so glad of your visit and appreciation. Your comment is one so encouraging. All the best in life. Thanks a lot. :) Sunita
Date: 6/30/2017 2:29:00 PM
Hi Sunita, Very interesting. I read a few of your other works as well. They were enjoyable. I see you are a very diverse writer. Keep up the good work. Thank you for commenting on my short story First Date. (The short story location does not have a return "comments" area.) I appreciate your remarks. Glad you enjoyed it. Have a great day. Earl
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/1/2017 7:42:00 AM
Thanks friend for the generous comment. Your short story was out of common. I enjoyed it. :)
Date: 6/29/2017 7:44:00 AM
Hi Sunita, absolutely brilliant and so clever to use the whole alphabet and fifteen syllables per line is amazing, inspirational piece. :))
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/29/2017 12:33:00 PM
Hi Roy, glad to have your visit...thanks for reading and leaving such nice words. :)
Date: 6/26/2017 4:05:00 AM
- A skilled poem, Sunita :) - Very well done ABC poem, impressive ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/26/2017 5:03:00 AM
Thanks Sunshine. Your visit and your valuable comment is so much appreciated. Hugs Sunita :)
Date: 6/26/2017 2:34:00 AM
" Death is a celestial pillow upon which the soul rests for a while dreaming of the life to come." is as close as I came to explain death, a definition that cannot compete with your marvelous analysis of the eternal mystery you my dear, Sunita have so gloriously depicte! Excellent!
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/26/2017 5:03:00 AM
Oh it a superb one liner you just gave here describing death! I'm so touched by your visit and praise for my small endeavour. Thanks lot. :)
Date: 6/25/2017 8:57:00 AM
So many wonderful lines in this one Sunita. Well done! I love it:)
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/25/2017 10:31:00 AM
Hi Daniel hope u'r doing fine...thanks lot for the visit and comment. :)
Date: 6/25/2017 8:37:00 AM
Wow...that's incredible
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/25/2017 10:30:00 AM
Hi thanks Tim for the read and appreciation. :)

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