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Dear Carolyn

I think about you as I cry, and wonder why you had to die, for there's a void now in my life, that emptiness cuts like a knife. I miss the way we used to chat and laugh, and feel sincerely that I'll miss you till the day I die. I think about you as I cry... written for Constance's contest in honour of Carolyn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 9/7/2021 6:24:00 PM
Dear Jack, your poignant pen weeps upon the page for the loss of your beautiful friend, Carolyn. The emotions spilled from your heart touches mine very deeply. Indeed, Carolyn was beloved. My heartfelt condolences to you, my friend. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/6/2021 7:18:00 AM
Your poem is emotional and it touches my heart, Jack. I still can't get over it, even though her passing away did not come as a surprise. ~ Best regards my friend // paul
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Date: 8/23/2021 11:41:00 AM
Jack, thank you for taking part in the Tributes To Carolyn, your poem is wonderful and touched my heart, Carolyn loved you my friend, you were special to her, she told me that often ~ Constance
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Date: 8/19/2021 3:01:00 PM
Knowing what incredibly good friends you were, this one REALLY touches my heart, Jack. It's so heartfelt and sincere. Wonderful tribute.
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Date: 8/19/2021 6:29:00 AM
Indeed, very personal. Seems that you knew her rather closely. Great Tribute.
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Date: 8/19/2021 4:57:00 AM
Thanks so much for sharing this, enabling me to know more intimately Carolyn (though I will surely miss her and her uplifting comments). God bless you.
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Date: 8/18/2021 8:23:00 PM
Congrats Jack on your win in the tribute to Carolyn. love phyl
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Date: 8/18/2021 6:31:00 PM
Emotional write,Jack, congratulations in Constance's Tribute. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/18/2021 4:01:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Jack-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/15/2021 5:52:00 PM
I know what a wonderful friendship you had with her Jack, such a shame dreams of meeting never came to fruition, your tribute is so heartful. thinking of you and mum:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/15/2021 2:10:00 PM
Lovely tribute to Carolyn Jack. I still cant believe that she's gone. May she Rest In Peace. Tom
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2021 5:53:00 PM
Even though i knew she was terminally ill its still not really sunk in:-( xx

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