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Dead horizon

It was raining with pain from above
and dews of blood are seeping,
on the windows, houses and asphalt
putting out the fire of life feeling.

from the branches of the oaks from the hill
on a string dead cold bodies are hanging,
down are staying the trails of hope
and in the sky,the last sunset is shining.

and the burned out trees, full of ashes,
are waving in the cold wind alone,
they reopen the door for a moment
and let the soul to go home...

all that is left now is empty,
on the river,the willow is dying,
on the streets the life dead lost feeling
and on the grass the dews of blood crying.

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  1. Date: 1/7/2009 12:13:00 PM
    very well done. you did a great job of creating a visual image, relly enjoyed it

  1. Date: 1/6/2009 7:34:00 PM
    Congratulations on the re-featuring. Poetry is great therapy for a lot of pain. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 1/5/2009 5:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on being a finalist and having your poetry featured. Love Carol

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 2:46:00 PM
    Excellent poem, and sincere congratulations on making it to the finals and having it featured this week! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 9:36:00 AM
    Andrea - Seems to me like a double congratulations is in order – A Finalist and a featured poem – Great Job – God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 6:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on being a featured finalist this week! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 1/3/2009 7:25:00 PM
    In Plato's Cave allegory, the chained prisoners could only see the shadows on the darkened cave wall, not realizing the light coming from outside the cave is what made these shadows possible in the first place. For me that light is the home of the soul, the dead horizon is the cave walls, and I am the prisoner...Thank You Andreea.

  1. Date: 12/17/2008 1:52:00 PM
    Congratulations Andreea on making it to the next round. Good Luck in the finals. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

  1. Date: 11/30/2008 3:28:00 AM
    Andrea - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

  1. Date: 11/11/2008 9:30:00 AM
    Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 11/2/2008 8:36:00 PM
    Very emotional and though evoking . Best wishes in the next round. lainie

  1. Date: 11/1/2008 3:46:00 PM
    Andree - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

  1. Date: 10/27/2008 2:28:00 PM
    Andreea Congrats on your amazing poetry making the semi-finals and good luck in the final round! Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 10/27/2008 11:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/19/2008 1:32:00 PM
    Congrats Andreea On your wonderful poetry being featured again, very well deserved. Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 8/18/2008 12:50:00 PM
    Andreea - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week

  1. Date: 8/18/2008 10:33:00 AM
    Congratulations Andreea on having your poem featured! Nicole

  1. Date: 8/18/2008 10:03:00 AM
    Congratulations Andreea, on "Dead Horizon" being featured again. A lot of hurt and anger put into poetic verse. Excellent write. Vince

  1. Date: 8/18/2008 5:36:00 AM
    Congratulations Andreea on this amazing write being featured once again. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 8/18/2008 4:09:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured once again this week. Love, Carol