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The last raspberry tea awaits me . . .


 

I have the perfect view

          of romance,

as an acrobatic wind

          dances through,

the sapphire blue


 

    Let me linger in,

days of silk and sun-hats


 

     - thoughts of you -


 

And the touch of,

            a love

. . .   forever true

 

_______________

~*~ Daydreaming ~*~

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 6/6/2022 1:57:00 PM
A lovely daydream indeed, Brandy. So finely written that nothing is needed to experience it myself. Thanks for the pleasant thoughts to ponder on my friend. A mile of smiles, Bill
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Date: 6/7/2022 1:04:00 PM
Any day when the sun plays hide and seek in a tender sky, is a wonderful day to embrace. A perfect day to linger in a daydream. I'm so happy that you were able to caress such a moment through my words. Thank you Bill, for your lovely comment. I can feel your smiles. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 11/17/2021 5:43:00 AM
The breeze of romance envelops my soul as I drift in the softness of your words! You are a lovely and sensitive poet!!
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Date: 11/17/2021 7:33:00 PM
Such a beautiful comment and compliment. I'm blushing. Words should touch the skin, all the senses. Thank you, Mike. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
Date: 10/18/2021 4:01:00 PM
wow.... I am so melting....sigh
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Date: 10/18/2021 6:49:00 PM
Awe, such a sweet thing to say. Thank you, Robert. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Date: 9/28/2021 8:16:00 PM
Sweet and soft and tender as a spring breeze, and as romantic as love-lit eyes under a full moon. * * * I hope you are wonderfully well, Brandy. Hugs, Paul
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Date: 9/30/2021 8:02:00 PM
Such a breeze is elegant and graceful, caressing the skin ever so sweetly. Your thoughts are tender and beautiful. (I am) doing *wonderfully well*. My best to you, Paul. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 9/18/2021 1:01:00 AM
With Fall upon us Brandy my panama will soon go into winte stotage(sadly)Have a creative weekend
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Date: 9/19/2021 7:40:00 AM
Same here, Brian. All of my summer attire is about to be packed away until next year. Fall is such a beautiful and inspiring time. I am enjoying a wonderful weekend. I hope all is well in your world. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 9/1/2021 1:35:00 PM
Very cool “simple scribble”!
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Date: 9/1/2021 8:34:00 PM
So sweet of you to say. Thank you, Jennifer. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 7/17/2021 12:01:00 PM
I really like that pictures painted in this poem. The openness and airy freedom is palpable. Nicely done. Looking forward to more.
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Date: 7/17/2021 6:41:00 PM
Thank you, Andy. Moments create many beautiful memories. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 7/14/2021 5:45:00 AM
Wistfully sexy. I like the image this paints on my mind. Thanks as well for your thoughtful visit to my latest piece.hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/15/2021 7:11:00 PM
*Sexy in the sheets* Perhaps.. Thank you, Rick. I am blushing with your thoughts. You are very welcome. Your pen is golden. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 7/12/2021 11:48:00 AM
Thats such a profound image accompanying your poem. I speak for all saying I wish I was there. - Ken
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Date: 7/12/2021 6:49:00 PM
So kind of you to say, Ken. Wishing to be in such a moment. Your comment is tender and beautiful. :) Brandy
Date: 6/23/2021 10:49:00 AM
Mystic Rose Rose has nailed almost exactly what I was about to say, you are gifted dear Brandy. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
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Date: 6/24/2021 12:16:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer. Great minds think alike. (Soft smile) I appreciate your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/22/2021 5:56:00 PM
very beautiful and ethereally done :)
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Date: 6/22/2021 7:14:00 PM
Thank you, Mystic Rose. You and your thoughts are greatly appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 6/20/2021 7:52:00 AM
This is so sweet and a pleasure to read today. Beautiful Brandy :)
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Date: 6/20/2021 9:20:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Your thoughts bring a smile. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Date: 6/18/2021 7:30:00 PM
Beautiful Memories.
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Date: 6/19/2021 7:16:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 6/14/2021 10:11:00 AM
"an acrobatic wind dances through, the sapphire blue", has me reminiscing of happy days of summers past and looking forward to summer that is just around the corner. My first romance was in summer, long ago now, but the memories are sweet and nostalgic. Thank you for taking me there, Brandy. All my best to you ~ John
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Date: 6/14/2021 7:11:00 PM
As the wind races and then plays somersaults, love is welcomed by a tender heart. "Summer love" Seems we have all experienced a touch of melancholy, mixed with beautiful and breathtaking moments. Thank you, John. You and your thoughts are greatly appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/4/2021 7:06:00 PM
You paint a beautiful picture with this wonderful poem Brandy.. best wishes
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Date: 6/5/2021 5:59:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 6/3/2021 8:10:00 AM
Lovely penned piece Brandy, full of beauty and romance and a joy to read indeed. Hope all's well, blessings, Gordon
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Date: 6/3/2021 5:21:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon. Daydreaming of romance and such tender moments. I appreciate you and your wonderful comment. I am doing well. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 6/2/2021 6:07:00 PM
Brandy, you've written a wonderful poem. I see the first sentence, "The final raspberry tea awaiting me," as an invitation to share a special moment:) It's a pleasure to read you this early evening. Amazing Brandy.
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Date: 6/2/2021 8:24:00 PM
Hi Lasaad, your kind words bring a smile. Sharing a romantic moment with someone special. A beautiful daydream indeed. I am so happy that you enjoyed this little scribble of mine. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 6/1/2021 3:57:00 PM
A delightful poem that I'd classify as vintage, going by the title and content, Brandy. I find the introductory line "The last raspberry tea awaits me" to be an invitation to share a moment of romance with you. ~ Regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/1/2021 7:45:00 PM
Yes, this could be labeled as vintage, with the title and the photo. The mood that has been set. Oh my ! Sharing in a romantic moment with me- that is a possibility. Thank you, Paul. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/1/2021 3:05:00 AM
I missed this beautiful romantic poem. o much imagery that makes the mind work overtime. Hugs.
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Date: 6/1/2021 7:24:00 PM
Victor, your thoughts caress softly around me. Romance is in the air and I am lingering in a daydream. Thank you, my sweet friend, for your kind words. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/30/2021 8:46:00 PM
O' so much more than a simple scribble my dear friend! Tis a truly delightful romantic and enticing new creation. I do so love raspberry tea myself. Always sweetened with honey , instead of sugar. Wonderful imagery and such a smooth flow. A delight, a fav... God bless...
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Date: 5/31/2021 5:41:00 PM
Thank you, Robert. Your thoughts caress softly around my heart. I am so happy that you enjoyed what I have created here. Moments of sunshine and love, a sip of tea. Honey is delightful in the mix. Thank you for all your kind words. I appreciate you placing this in your favorites. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Date: 5/27/2021 9:01:00 AM
Oh I do Like this one. So well expressed. There is a summery feel to this. A fave for me. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/27/2021 7:13:00 PM
Thank you, Judy. Summer is such a beautiful season. :) So kind of you to place this in your favorites. I am smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Date: 5/26/2021 8:36:00 PM
Titled perfectly, Brandy! Excelsior, gw
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Date: 5/26/2021 8:58:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon. I enjoy daydreaming : ) Brandy
Date: 5/24/2021 11:28:00 PM
For one of such simple scribbles, in my opinion enough to move mountains, yes your poetry is so beautiful, it moves this old bugger to tears...You and your muse are very precious my dear.
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Date: 5/25/2021 7:48:00 PM
"My simple thoughts are "Enough to move Mountains" I am in awe with this compliment, along with being *precious* Thank you, Harry. Your thoughts touch my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Date: 5/24/2021 5:07:00 PM
Ahhh, all of a sudden my Lipton tea just tasted so much better as I’m reading this delightful and delicious raspberry tea on this romantic summer view... Sooooo good to read you this early evening beautiful Brandy :)
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Date: 5/24/2021 6:44:00 PM
Softly smiling at you, Akkina. I am happy that you found my words *Delightful and Delicious* all at the same time. Your thoughts bring a smile, on a tender Monday evening. Thank you ! My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 5/21/2021 4:40:00 AM
How beautifully romantic write, Brandy! Perfect view of romance---days of silk---splendid vocabulary. Daydreams of the heart!
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Date: 5/21/2021 7:56:00 PM
An amazing compliment, coming from such a talented writer as yourself. Thank you, Vijay. I don't have a *Splendid vocabulary* I am just scribbling words from the heart. Daydreams and moments. :) Brandy
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