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Daydream

Once upon a time there was a girl who dreamed of a fancy houses and a peaceful world Blue, purple , and pink flowers along the street Right where night and day meet The spray of fluffy white seeds from dandelions sprinkle the air Sweet spring breeze blowing through my hair The soft touch of the sun against my face warms my nose The unmistakable smell of a rose I feel myself drifting to a daze Daydreaming it'll be my turn someday to go to the big city Where the flashing lights and action show no pity Or maybe the islands Drink pi na~colada until my body and relaxation make mends Melting as a fine brother caresses my hand And takes me down the beach As far as the sunshine will reach Daydreams, night dreams Let's wake up to see what my dreams will redeem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 8:19:00 AM
Alesha - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/29/2008 7:48:00 PM
Alesha - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/18/2008 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:13:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/22/2008 3:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2008 6:14:00 PM
Awesome write here, Alesha .. reads almost like a Ballad ... smile ... glad you're at the Soup and congratulations on your writing being featured this week!
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Date: 10/19/2008 8:45:00 PM
Alesha congrats on having your poem featured this week - God Bless
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Date: 10/19/2008 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations Alesha on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/19/2008 4:22:00 PM
Vivid imagery forwards your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/19/2008 2:51:00 PM
Alesha - Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Peace always, John
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