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Day Dream Moment

Sometimes my head is in the clouds Shutting out a moment of time I stare at a realm beyond My mind drifts in and out of fantasy land Bringing warm sensations to the overcrowded mind Immune to the world around Lost in a cloud that encircles the vision Where reality leaves and the dream world awakes Envisioning a perfect state A glimpse of a peaceful day dream moment A sound jolts me back to reality The clouds float away, and my day dream moment gone.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2011 9:21:00 PM

ahhh, calgon, take me away. You were having such a sweet calgon moment there!! I'm sure glad I stumbled on this one I had not read . Let me see if I can find at least one more new one for me!

Jessica D'Agostino

Date: 5/12/2010 10:23:00 PM

I too, day dream often. Very good poem, glad to have read it tonight. -Jesse

Simone Segal

Date: 3/28/2010 9:26:00 AM

I beleive our day dreaming is where reality lies! love Simone

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/24/2010 7:30:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Phyllis. Thank you for sharing it. Hoping you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2010 9:27:00 PM

As a child, I spent much time lost in daydreams. They were indeed visions of "a perfect state," Phillis. Wish they didn't have to end. Terriffic writing! Love, Carolyn

Date: 3/23/2010 5:48:00 PM

We all need a bit of fantasy in these challening times to keep our sanity. I like the uplifting feel of this poem. Keep on writing. Thank you for your comment. Karen

Mitch White

Date: 3/23/2010 5:21:00 PM

Beautiful dreamy day spent in a flash- enjoyed it- if you read my `Mother Nature` the similar words in the same places on each poem are surreal

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/23/2010 4:30:00 PM

lovely--enjoyed reading

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/23/2010 4:10:00 PM

Sounds lovely Phyllis and something to look forward to if it does exist..count me in too... beautiful imagery and lovely flowing lines..enjoyed... hope u will comment on my new blog today..luv.. Linda-Marie..